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cusick
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0 posted 2003-10-17 05:21 AM


BEN

He's here at last, our baby boy,
After all those months of waiting
He is an angel all day long
So cute and entertaining.

Nightfall comes, and very soon
I'm dreaming,then I wake up with
A jolt,
Our little boy is screaming.

His crumpled face is red with rage,
His nappy it needs changing,
and all the time I'm doing this
his future I'm arranging.

We'll send him back from
Where he came, and catch
Up with our sleeping.

When dawn arrives he's fast asleep
I know that we will keep him.


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1 posted 2003-10-17 02:11 PM


Maggie:  This is a cute poem and one all parents can relate to, I'm sure. It's always hard getting through those first few months but worth it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2003-10-18 07:32 AM


this revives such vivid memories for me. This is a clever piece. well done...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2003-10-18 10:55 AM


This is wonderful so much love and delight here.  Nothing like new babies to start the poetic juices.  Love, Joyce
junemac
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4 posted 2003-10-18 12:47 PM


such amazing and wonderful joy and agony both come with our precious new arrivals.
this is lovely, lovely flow and rhyme and such realism and fun.


thanks for sharing this delightful poem.

hugs june xxxxxxxxxxxxx

cusick
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5 posted 2003-10-18 02:35 PM


Thank you all very much, luv, Maggie
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6 posted 2003-10-18 08:14 PM


Very nice, Maggie - I'm soooooo  happy for you... I'm glad he's a keeper... What a lot you'd have gone through otherwise... Aren't little ones just the MOST fun???...
cusick
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7 posted 2003-10-19 09:36 AM


Thank you Nan but this was many years ago, Luv, Maggie
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8 posted 2003-10-19 02:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is adorable, sweet friend, I too agree that raising babies must instead have its growing pains but we only love them more and more and soon their cries feel so pure to our hearts! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

cusick
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9 posted 2003-10-19 03:56 PM


Noah thank you so much for your lovely remarks. Hugs Maggie
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cusick
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11 posted 2003-10-23 08:32 AM


THANK YOU PASSING SHADOW. Maggie
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