Corner Pub #2 |
Shattered Dreams |
cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
SHATTERED DREAMS I saw the sadness in her eyes and knew that it is over. No more would I linger in sweet ecstasy, in once warm arms grown Cold like Winter's snowy peaks. She knew . Desire lay like ashes between us. One brief dalliance from our sacred bastion denied me all my tomorrows dreams. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very sad, cusick, and very well expressed. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Sad and touching. Joyce |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thanks for replying Denise. Luv, Maggie |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you Joyce, luv Maggie |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
ohhhhhhhhh so sweetly sad. it is such a shame and a hard lesson to learn.. tears and hugs june xxxxxxx |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you June for your reply. Maggie |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
I really like the style you used on this piece. well written... the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you for your nice remarks Pegasus. Maggie |
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paraboxer Member
since 2002-11-10
Posts 121Maryland, USA |
Sad. Very sad, truly spoken from the heart these words are. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Thank you paraboxer. I don't know why most of my poems are sad, just opposite to the real me. Maggie |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) Oh Maggie, I'm happy to hear that these poems are the opposite of how you're really feeling, though it saddens me to know many who truly feel this way each day! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt writing, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Noah you are so right about some poor people having to suffer, most won't ask for help because they are afraid. Hugs Maggie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wondered if you were writing my life |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Oh Passing Shadow I do hope that things are better for you. Love and hugs. Maggie |
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