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cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2003-10-14 04:05 PM

SHATTERED DREAMS

I saw the sadness in her eyes
and knew that it is over.
No more would I linger
in sweet ecstasy,
in once warm arms
grown Cold like
Winter's snowy peaks.

She knew .

Desire lay like
ashes between us.
One brief dalliance
from our sacred bastion
denied me all my
tomorrows dreams.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

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1 posted 2003-10-14 07:53 PM

Very sad, cusick, and very well expressed.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2003-10-15 02:09 AM

Sad and touching. Joyce

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

3 posted 2003-10-15 03:51 AM

Thanks for replying Denise. Luv, Maggie

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2003-10-15 03:52 AM

Thank you Joyce, luv Maggie

junemac
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since 2003-04-24

Posts 1005
uk

5 posted 2003-10-17 05:24 PM

ohhhhhhhhh so sweetly sad. it is such a shame and a hard lesson to learn..

tears and hugs june xxxxxxx

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

6 posted 2003-10-18 05:57 AM

Thank you June for your reply. Maggie

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

7 posted 2003-10-18 07:29 AM

I really like the style you used on this piece. well written...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

8 posted 2003-10-18 09:49 AM

Thank you for your nice remarks Pegasus. Maggie

paraboxer
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since 2002-11-10

Posts 121
Maryland, USA

9 posted 2003-10-18 10:00 PM

Sad. Very sad, truly spoken from the heart these words are.

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

10 posted 2003-10-19 09:33 AM

Thank you paraboxer. I don't know why most of my poems are sad, just opposite to the real me. Maggie

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2003-10-19 01:59 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Maggie, I'm happy to hear that these poems are the opposite of how you're really feeling, though it saddens me to know many who truly feel this way each day! (sad sigh) This is heartfelt writing, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

12 posted 2003-10-19 04:03 PM

Noah you are so right about some poor people having to suffer, most won't ask for help because they are afraid. Hugs Maggie

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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13 posted 2003-10-23 04:01 AM

I wondered if you were writing my life

cusick
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since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

14 posted 2003-10-23 08:36 AM

Oh Passing Shadow I do hope that things are better for you. Love and hugs. Maggie

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