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so suddenly

mistyrose
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 75
state of anxiety

0 posted 2001-07-25 02:55 AM

you came to me
so suddenly,so sweetly
into the night laughter echoing
outside
our perfect sadness
spontaneous flirting
with delight

attraction---

that traveled over miles and space
it would only be a matter of
time
before my
heart would race
whenever i heard his name

he comes to me
so beautifully broken
to feel something real
in the night
i desire him
i learn to
love him
so suddenly,sweetly
so
beautifully
broken
its only a matter of time
in the night...

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-07-25 02:00 PM

A delight of a love poem. Joyce

Inanothertime
Member

since 2001-06-29

Posts 72

2 posted 2001-07-25 07:54 PM

this is very sweet, and lovely, good job!

epoet
Member

since 2000-05-11

Posts 291
grand rapid,MI, usa

3 posted 2001-07-25 08:43 PM

nice theme, great expression. I like the way it's written.

P. J. Kotrch
carpe diem
A soul once touched is a soul once blessed by love

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

4 posted 2001-07-26 07:06 AM

Good job. Enjoyed this very much.

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