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Just ... If |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Just … If~ ~*Marge Tindal*~ If I should pass this way again as word-thoughts in your head Know, my friend, I live again though some may think me dead~ There are too many words to pen and nowhere is there time to spill this ink-of-thinking gift in foreverly poetic rhyme~ In a quiet meadow I will come to you Listen … just listen It’s all you have to do~ I cannot take the words with me and there’s too much left to say … Come to the meadow now, my friend we must not wait another day~ Catch my word-thoughts and pen them when I am gone so far away Keep the spirited poetess of me breathing for though I tried … ……… I cannot stay~ ~*~ *Are you listening, my 'friend' ?* July 2003 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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wordancer Senior Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 809VA |
quote:"Lovely invition"...(peeking under the couch looking for my shoes)"I'll be ready in a moment" A lovely pleasent read! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: A beautiful, poignant write. We all listen for your words, as well as read and anticipate them! You have so much to write and reveal to us! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is beautiful Marge, but I hope we all have a long time to stay here and write. Love, Joyce |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge my sister of heart...The meadow, the place where your heart abides, is beautiful. But this, "for though I tried … ……… I cannot stay~" frightens me. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge...my 'friend'... Listening...hearing...knowing...loving... Big hugs to you, ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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IcyFlamez89 Member
since 2003-02-14
Posts 292Jersey City NJ |
I really loved it. and dont worry! you outlive us all, hehehe |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Marge, for years I have listened to your heart and read your beautiful words. And I hope your little Delaney will be blessed with your gift of rhyme. How I long to walk through your meadow with you, but for now, I walk in spirit with your words. Stay awhile longer; you are loved and read over and over again. Hugs and Luvs, Marti |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I close my eyes and see you in the meadow and your words flow straight to my heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you all dear poets and friends~ If ever there was a 'legacy' I am to leave ... it would be my poetic word-thoughts to surround you ... I appreciate each gentle kindness bestowed through your lovely replies and your hands held in friendship foreverly ... and beyond~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you ain't leavin for a long time lady...you hear that!? gorgeous write! |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I hope your're not leaving us soon.. you would be greatly missed here on these blue pages. |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
OMG this poem...it was absolutely AMAZING! Great work! ~J.Lynn "In life you must dance like no one is watching, sing like no one is listening and love like it's never going to hurt..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Friends~ Watch, wait ... and always promise to listen ... for it is the key to all you will ever need to unlock the words in the meadow~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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