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Theory of Shelter (II) |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind ![]() |
Theory of Shelter (II) Shelter to a raining day passenger Is a brief moment of thankfulness. Shelter to a homeless kid Is a spring of gratefulness. Shelter to a dependent woman Is a comfort zone, a blessing. Yet the same comfort zone, Will be gone someday. Still she is living within her shell, Unwilling to change, For changes bring uncomfortable, Yet changes must be taken places. One year passed, Two nearly comes, When her sources of comfort are gone, Life would be lowest in tears. (c)June 6, 2003 Eliza Simmons Eliza Simmons |
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dr tung Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 55singapore |
good read, interesting |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Wow Eliza, I like this! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eliza~ You continue to amaze me with your poetic sensitivity~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Interesting write this, one to make you think a bit. |
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