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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore 
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Let the rain in Feel the wind sing If you want to be free Come along and follow me Let your hair down Its time to have fun Who cares about routine When we have the sun I miss the times We spent together You were really you And I was really me Now that we've gone our separate ways Do you still look back? I've almost forgotton to laugh Or indulge myself Splash in the rain Do you still remember The good old days? What happened to 'us'? We're no longer 'we' Its such a sad fact of life Which I have to accept It has been really hard But I've tried my best So now you are you And I am me What happened to 'us'" What happened to 'we'? ----------- I don't know why I keep writing poems like this... it almost seems like an addiction! tell me if I'm obsessed... Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
obsessed or not, i felt your poem was really good with a great flow. I liked it a lot. hugs from june |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Well done and of course you're addicted to poetry. We all are. Love, Joyce |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your addiction becomes you, mb... Just keep on writing - whatever your subject...  |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Thank you dear June, Joyce and Nan  I love it here and you guys are the ones that make me come back here time after time ^_^ I'm truly blessed ah! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Michelle: I really enjoyed this poem. It asks questions we have all asked at one time or another in our lives, I'm sure. Well done! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I liked the way this piece was paced. It was smooth and I enjoyed it. The one thing that stood out to me was the first two stanzas. They seems to have a different feel to it the the rest of the piece. Was this done on purpose? Marilyn. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michelle~ 'Let the rain in Feel the wind sing' Just a WOWSER of an opening~ Seems almost like a poem in itself~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Dear Betty, I'm glad u share my sentiments. Its actually a very surreal feeling... *many hugs* Marilyn, the first two stanzas was meant to be sort of like a fleeting scene whereby the memory plays before me like a dream... I'm glad u enjoy it *_* Dearest Marge! awwww ur so sweet UR SO SWEET!!!! Thanks! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
keep writing, I enjoy these |
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