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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
They say that poetry comes from the heart, Expressions of emotions from within, Silent feelings you want to get out, So maybe others can read and reflect. But poetry is only words on paper. Ink on processed trees. Nothing known to man Can truely describe how you feel, And translate those feelings To another person's mind So they positively Know how you feel. There are thousands of words, But infinate emotions. So what you feel Is stuck in your head And it can never come out. And if it does, and you believe, You'll still never know for sure If it is captured by another mind In the same way It was locked in yours. There are thousands of words, But infinate emotions. "Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives" |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
All we can do is try and you did a great job of telling your emotions. Joyce |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BlackAndWhiteHorizon~ Ah, but I have this notion that word-thoughts that fly my way are meant to be shared with others to enjoy on any given day~ Interpretations of their choosing sits with me just fine ... the poetry within my head is not really mine~ For I am but the vessel into which the thoughts are poured My mission in this life ... is to see that they are shared~ For kept locked in the vessel they would die an untimely death for sure Releasing these emotions touches another ... of THAT I am sure~ Thank you for 'inspiring' my thoughts to leap to my pen~ I hope you keep sharing with us~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff! Thanks Marge |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
blackandwhitehorizon wow ur nick was a mouthful, so was ur poem. I do love them both! and Margie u did a wonderful job too!!! Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
horizon..... I believe that you are right in a way....we may try forever to get someone to understand the feelings in our heart, but I also believe that the reason we are poets is because we are compelled to succeed at just that. Ranea |
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blackandwhitehorizon Member
since 2003-05-05
Posts 183an akward state of mind |
I agree with you, Ranea, and I think that's a good way of putting it. "Being grown up isn't half as fun as growing up; these are the best days of our lives" |
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swatcatpettus Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 57CA |
Thats really deep, and I respect it. I can really relate. |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
It's true. We can never really tell if our words make another feel how we do/did...but it's every poets wish I think. Good job expressing the limitations a poem has. BWA |
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