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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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uk

0 posted 2004-06-21 04:16 PM


a little bit of wishing nonsense in a thin poem from me :0)
POETTREE



Wishing tree

Of poetry

Bearing fruit

Endlessly

Planted spring

Tiny sapling

Watching buds

Happening

Fat in June

Full of bloom

Every leaf

Rhyme’s a tune

Watch in fall

As gold on all

Gilds leaves

Large and small

Muse on leaf

Poetic mischief

Settling wishes

underneath

Poetry, poetry

Oh my wishing tree

Granting wishes

On leaves for me.



© Copyright 2004 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
Beasley
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since 2003-11-28
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1 posted 2004-06-21 04:23 PM


Neat poem; clever idea!
love, Barb

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2 posted 2004-06-22 02:19 AM


Brilliant!  Loved the idea, and wish I could plant one myself
SPIRIT
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3 posted 2004-06-22 11:17 AM


I love this, a beautiful 'scroll' down your Poettree...very clever and prettily presented.
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Member Patricius
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Idaho, USA
4 posted 2004-06-22 04:56 PM


Dear June:  Cleverly done and fun to read.

Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Broken_Winged_Angel
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Small Town, Somewhere
5 posted 2004-06-23 07:58 PM


Cute, lyrical and sweet.  Thank you for sharing

BWA

junemac
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uk
6 posted 2004-06-24 06:42 AM


I dont know if i replied or not to all your lovely comments ( sometimes they appear and sometimes not )

Thank you all. I am glad you enjoyed  my poem.
june x

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