make the freezin' gazebo go

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make the freezin' gazebo go

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2001-06-26 06:28 AM

The dynamite chicken
need a lotta reworkin'
see it climb down the chimney
to the bells of ol' rhymny
i doan truss 'is judgement
if he mixen cement
can drive to a dement
enfurl'd 'n excrement
los' swingin' outa element
that dynamite chicken

feel 'is pulse go
catterin' to 'n fro
he's a demon on a drawstring
'will mope 'fore a goin'
that's the foal cosmetic
he knows it too well
bind him in oinment sweet
dream lost in a deep deep sleep
holy dynamite chicken

o follow me roll down dale
by the brook spanish moss
'n canteloped dragoon
i will open a fishhook sky
and maple by drifting eye
do you follow my young midden
by streets long and narrow
to the museen call spire
he calls you to go
without call or red fright
not to splash dynamite
by yellow feathers floating
goats bleating
and choking
to the windsphere
on the high cloak hill mist
THERE!
Bespoke driver
artichoke color sphere
he waits
noddin'
sleepy
callin' ya...

Chick chickie chick chick
through a cylinder ear
hear a sound like surf
bright rainbow snorter
echoing faded dynamite
so bright
horses set alight
in polythene mirrors
swooned by rivers
grassed
sitting pretty in moonshine
real toasty licken'
prawn whale kickin'
the dynamite chicken

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-06-26 11:24 AM

Hi Allan, This is a fun read, although I have not deciphered it all yet. It's good rhyming. Joyce

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

2 posted 2001-06-26 01:04 PM

Thank you Joyce... I could not decipher it either! (just some sub-consciousity) (c:

Sharon
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 53
Within a whisper

3 posted 2001-06-27 11:01 PM

Sounds like a song to me...Liked it though.

allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

4 posted 2001-07-03 04:46 PM

You are quite right Sharon - I wrote this as a "song"...

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