Corner Pub #2 |
Pieces |
pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
In time this ache will ease I know, the sleepless nights will finally go, reminders of what used to be, will fade into dim memory, the chaos of this trying time, will steady to routine sublime, someday I’ll learn to smile again, although I can’t predict just when, the heart will heal, the mind repair, I’ll cease to think of you not there, these days are spent in shadows deep, no more sweet rendezvous to keep, collect the pieces, one by one, until the tears no longer run, somewhere the sun is shining bright, someday I know I’ll be all right. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Another beauiful piece it is as well. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes with your attitude you will be okay. Sorry this happens to nice people. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sad but hopeful for the future. Well done. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Red_Feather Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 131The Vagabond Sea |
Well written pegasus, there is a strange energy in that state of mind, you presented it well. One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I'm sorry some people go through this. Very well done. Good piece and good attitude. Melton [This message has been edited by 2dalimit (edited 06-27-2001).] |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
I'm so jealous of your work! You say what I mean the way I really mean to say it...and, if I may say so, well said my friend! I felt every line. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
reminders of what used to be, will fade into dim memory, I await this day! A wonderful write indeed. Maree |
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Gypsy Junior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 20VA Coast |
I found this very beautiful although it is about sadness. Your experience and honesty shines through as if a spirit to heal not only yourself but others. I really loved this. Oh and especially the Frost clip...most likely one of the greatest poets to ever live.... "Two roads diverged in a wood, and I-- I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." Thank you for sharing and my heart and prayers go out to you. To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson |
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