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Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

0 posted 2001-06-15 11:50 PM

The belly of a serpent
  lurks just beneath my skin
marking the wisdon
  of my chosen path
my past clouds
  slowly blow thin
I stretch my wings
  nearly ready
    for the sky again

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

1 posted 2001-06-16 12:01 PM

Good description of the inner beast. We all are animals, no matter how much we try to conceal it.

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-06-16 10:11 AM

I hope those wings unfurl and you soar. Joyce

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2001-06-24 12:40 PM

very strong imagery....i sure hope we get to soar unburdened too...

Gypsy
Junior Member

since 2001-06-15

Posts 20
VA Coast

4 posted 2001-07-01 02:23 AM

i really like the imagery...you could go for miles describing more i bet. this is a wonderful creation.

To be great is to be misunderstood. Emerson

Red_Feather
Member

since 2001-01-19

Posts 131
The Vagabond Sea

5 posted 2001-07-01 08:38 AM

Thank you all for the kind words, they have reached me at a good moment.

One's not half two it's two are halves of one EE Cummings

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