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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Pan's Place The woods seem very strange today. The trees above me swish and sway. While in the path, swift shadows play, I hear pipe music, far away! There is a rustling everywhere. Electric tension fills the air. I stand and wonder if I dare, Disturb the eeriness in there. Sly, elfin faces peer at me, Behind the trunk of every tree. The smile and wait and watch to see How I react to sorcery! Then, close behind the leafy wall, Silvery voices rise and fall. That's when I suddenly recall, I don't have time to walk at all! Betty Lou Hebert Published in Poet's Fantasy, 1995 [This message has been edited by Trillium (01-28-2003 12:13 AM).] |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Totally delightful. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely, musical poem. I love it. Joyce |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
(Big Smiles)  Sounds like to me that the Pan Clan is having some church.... I bet ya when they pass around the "pixie dust" that the service really takes off.... Trillium, I loved your poem. Simply Magical.-Bob |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
SPIRIT, Joyce and Bob: My face is very red right now! I intended this one for Corner Pub and just discovered I posted in the wrong site. I do appreciate all the nice comments though! I have requested that it be moved to Corner and hopefully it will be, before too many more people read it. Thanks for sparing my feelings and not letting my "boo-boo" color your comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Enchanting piece of fantasy, Betty Lou! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Denise: Nice to hear from you and thanks for reading. Betty Lou Hebert |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Wonderful read! Very refreshing! As in another poem of yours that I like I felt as if I was there myself. Your words take me places, thank you. WinterWren |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Winter Wren: Thank you for those kind words! If I can carry you along with me, I have reached my goal! Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
this world you present to us so vividly is surely the world you call home. you are a soft glow in the darkness dear lady..bravo. the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
pegasus111: Thank you pegasus for your sweet words. I do live with woods around and sometimes, they do seem enchanted! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Enchanting...absolutely magical!! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Betty; this is so enchanting.. I love it! You are a wondrous poet! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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lorenlynn Member
since 2003-01-27
Posts 203California Beaches |
I am so impressed with the way you rythme - lovely. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Nancy: Thanks for your response. Nice to hear from you! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
ellie: Thank you so much for your falttering remarks! Glad you enjoyed the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
lorenlynn: Thank you! I appreciate your comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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