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Street Heart Member
since 2002-09-05
Posts 349Pennsylvania,USA 
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I listened to the words you say, but the syllables ran dry Content distorted like the rains that smudge the roads that run upon this bleeding canvas leading me to this Lonely Avenue I've been here before, entered the door that took me to these stark,abandoned byways... Resurgent clouds loom on a low horizon and ever stalk the streets that take me to this "Never" land I've seen this vacant street, appraising dusty,broken shop windows selling nothing that line the thoroughfare... But they are just the words you say without remorse... the ones that echo down through ancient portals portenting a "love" that never lasts now remembering those pasts where you muttered that word of words, the one you'd use without sincerity All your lies melt between the cracks there on the road on down the lane... the way that leads me to the street they call... Lonely Avenue If a man has not discovered something he is willing to die for,his life is not worth living. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Street I felt the pain here. I too have been wandering down that same avenue so the feelings were fresh for me. Fantastic read. Juls |
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Lonestar Junior Member
since 2002-12-04
Posts 35Glasgow, Scotland |
Thought it was an ace poem. Thank you for the read...and hope that you find the path your looking for. Lonestar |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is an excellent write. I really enjoyed the read... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Whoa....this is a very sincere write. Can feel the pain here. Enjoyed. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Great write. Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
where are you? I surely do miss your writings...and have wondered about you often... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Merry Christmas my dear sweet friend~ I miss you here and hope you are doing well and getting that song written~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*No matter what I search for ... |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
this is the first i have seen or read of what youv'e written and all i can say is you sure know how to put in words the way i have felt. i hope you are not now walking that path and have found some happiness. Merry Christmas Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
I've missed reading your works too! And as always, your simple style of writing exudes so many heartfelt emotions Love MiCheLLe If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues |
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