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Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

0 posted 2002-12-10 01:15 AM

You Decide, I Drive...

I’m aching to hear you –
(‘Where do you want to go?
You decide, I drive...’)
but I’m squashed here in the library;
head in my hand
and I’m so lonely,
scribbling your name on the wall.

I need to fall into your eyes –
with the way you look at me
you can persuade me I’m special.
I want your gentle hands
holding mine, holding me –
the love in your touch lets me bloom,
takes my breath
makes me miss you...
‘Where do you want to go?’
Anywhere with you.

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2002-12-10 03:40 PM

I love the way this poem made me feel ....

it's beautiful.

Maree

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2002-12-10 04:25 PM

YuLan~

'I need to fall into your eyes –'

LOVE THAT THOUGHT~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-12-10 04:53 PM

Sweet little love poem, here. I like "you can persuade me I’m special" -- it gives a bit of emptiness and need to the proceedings, which adds depth (and a bit of sadness).

Or maybe I read these things too deeply.

Lonestar
Junior Member

since 2002-12-04

Posts 35
Glasgow, Scotland

4 posted 2002-12-10 06:04 PM

Loved the poem, felt like I could relate to it. Thanks for the great read, and ur encouragement on my posts.

Lonestar

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

5 posted 2002-12-11 05:38 AM

Dearest Lynne,

I like this! Very much like me... I'll rather believe sweet words though I feel otherwise! And coz of that I'll go anywhere...

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2002-12-13 03:35 PM

"Anywhere with you." Truly loving. Joyce

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2002-12-14 01:29 AM

beautiful and hearfelt thanks for sharing

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

8 posted 2002-12-16 02:37 AM

Thank you all so much!!
bsquirrel, no, you didn't read too much into it.. that's actually the whole point o that line.. I guess it's as Michelle said, about believing sweet words although feeling otherwise.. I really do believe him, and he makes me feel something I would never have dreamed was possible because I always thought I wasn't good enough for anything.

Thank you for your generous replies

Love y'all
-Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

9 posted 2002-12-29 03:45 PM

Lynne~
Oh...I just love this write.
So softly and tenderly penned,
and the last lines are perfect.
Such a lovely feel this has.
Beautifully penned.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

10 posted 2002-12-30 01:46 AM

I love the way you word it

Sweet poem. Admire much.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

LADY_DEATH
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 105
Fl

11 posted 2002-12-30 01:23 PM

I love this poem, more people should be as loving and caring as you were in this poem.Good job!

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

12 posted 2003-01-01 07:01 PM

Thanks..

This is for Takuya (Though he already knows that!)
Thanks for reading, and thanks for enjoying!! ^_^

Love,
Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

13 posted 2003-01-02 12:10 PM

Well written. Nice.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

janmew
Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 134
Canada

14 posted 2003-01-03 10:27 PM

Awwww... this feeling, I know! You wrote this so well, the feeling came through perfectly.

Jan

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

15 posted 2003-01-06 12:46 PM

Thanks Jan and Daniel, I appreciate your comments.. ^^

Love ya'll
-Lynne

It's nice to share - kiss someone when you have a cold.

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