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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
BARTER I had it all, Security and the love Of a faithful partner. Contentment and my needs More than met. The knowledge that I Would never be alone. I was loved, cherished, Honored and respected. I had it all, More than I thought I would ever have. Yes! I had it all. Barter? Yes, I will, For passion, Toe turning, Spine tingling Passion. For a night With a knight In shining armor. For fireworks, Loud, colorful, Vibrant, Shoot to the moon Fireworks. Barter? Yes I did, Now I have nothing. ********* Just a little footnote here, my writing is Truths, Lies and Imagination, and I alone know which is which. I am an enigma, even unto myself. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
I have my opinion but we are supposed to be able to let our imaginations go when writing poetry. Very good and a poignant lesson here. Joyce |
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midnightblues Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 1597Singapore |
Ah yes SPIRIT, this is a very tantalizing read! how do u know that i love reading romance huh? heee  Love Michelle If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well done SPIRIT. I enjoyed this. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I like this style. This poem reminds us I think of the saying, not to throw all your dice in one sitting, something like that..although for me, I never win anything in slot machines. (don't mistake me, I went maybe twice or thrice..hehe) |
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