I Live In A Jar...Blessed From Above

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aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member

since 2001-09-20

Posts 1448
Universal Mind

0 posted 2003-01-04 09:49 PM

I live in a jar
Full of sweet sugar.
Eating all the pollen
Dropped by Bees.

All I can see
Is the circular sky above.
A swarm of flies or two [ha ha]
Fly across the sky [LOL]
Then they disappear
(Just like they don't exist!)

Then the sky adjusts her clothes.
As she lays down her dress,
Magic wand changes her dress in to hue!

After the last song of the day sung,
The sky dress her room black.
Sometimes a women with fat round white figure,
Will peek in the jar at night.

Other times when room is dim,
There will be lights of shape
Fine like petals.
I get to know some petals
When the wind get a chance to embrace me.
The petals are my blankets
At night in time of snow.

I'm blessed,
I'm blessed with all are given,
Yet someday...
(Speaker)
Someday I have to get out of the jar...
And then...
Will I still be alive?

//You know why I say LOL and haha there? Cuz those arent' flies. LOL. Just a side note.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (01-04-2003 11:21 PM).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2003-01-04 11:16 PM

very imaginative. I am not sure I am seeing the same things you are, but that is okay. Love, Joyce

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-01-05 09:35 AM

I must agree with Joyce. I am not quite sure exactly what you are in this poem....or who you might be...but it is interesting. I have read it several times. For an odd reason it makes me smile - smiling is a good thing. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2003-01-05 03:20 PM

Eliza: A very unusual concept! Living on honey is not a bad thing! You have a wonderful imagination! I enjoyed the poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

midnightblues
Senior Member

since 2000-07-01

Posts 1597
Singapore

4 posted 2003-01-06 04:46 AM

Eliza Eliza I LOVE THIS!!! cheeky and fun! definitely my favourite poem so far!!!

Love
Michelle

If there cannot be equal in affection, then let the one with more be me - midnightblues™

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2003-01-06 11:51 AM

That's what a poem should be - just let your words fly and see where it takes you. You can go just as far as your imagination can bring you.
I like these lines:
"When the wind get a chance to embrace me.
The petals are my blankets
At night in time of snow."

Although I do wonder if the petals can cover me enough from the cold..

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