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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-10-12 02:05 PM


Sometimes my song grows silent
from a soulful sadness deep.
Yet You are with me Lord,
as trying times abound.
You ever hold me close in Peace,
and always see me through.
For here is where you take
my song,
as sweet as it may be,
to recompose and deepen chords,
enriching every note.

Tis then my heart will sing anew
Your Melody returned!


A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

[This message has been edited by ellie LeJeune (10-12-2002 02:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-12 04:25 PM


Lovely melody Ellie.  Joyce
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2 posted 2002-10-12 05:22 PM


ellie:  Enjoyed your poem and it's true His music will not be denied!

Betty Lou Hebert

Denise
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3 posted 2002-10-13 12:32 PM


Very lovely, Ellie!
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4 posted 2002-10-15 07:49 AM


lovely as usual Ellie.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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5 posted 2002-10-15 09:49 PM


reads almost like a plasm; nice.
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6 posted 2002-10-15 10:06 PM


Ellie~
Just BEAUTIFUL~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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7 posted 2002-10-21 12:23 PM


This is so true of my life experience too. Right now I am at the beginning of your poem again. Your poem is encouraging.
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8 posted 2002-11-30 04:47 PM



Ellie~
This is beautiful, my friend.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2005-06-17 09:31 AM


EllieEllieEllie~
Too quiet in the Pub ... get back here and *gift* us with another poetic beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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