Corner Pub #2 |
they come to us in dreams |
Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
they come to us in dreams.... not those dreams that paint a conscious impression but the ones erased instantly as we awake leaving us with an uneasy feeling that we did dream something important.... but what? they come to us in those dreams dancing to the beat of our flickering REM's while softly singing seductive tunes of what we should or should not do. they come to us in dreams and whisper suggestions that long after they leave still buzz at our ears like pesky gnats and hungry mosquitoes they tighten the strings of our secret desires and play on our weaknesses, play on our strengths, 'til we are unwitting puppets beneath their controlling fingers they come to us in dreams and in some they plant seeds that sprout into flowers of majestic endeavors... in some they hide germs to breed Evil's mischief with failure and spite with whimsical schemes they come to our dreams to feed or devour to build or destroy to push and pull backward and forward realities we have yet to meet and when their sport's done they leave us in daylight indelibly marked yet puzzled and wondering like abandoned lovers waking alone [This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 06-06-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This happens to me constantly, I hardly ever remember my dreams. I enjoyed your poem, Mike! |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
This is a hauntingly interesting poem of the workings of the sub-concious mind, and it's mystifying effects on our concious states. Very thoughtful presentation--a good read! David No Better Place do I know God Bless us All!!! |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thank you Denise and deleeme....glad you both enjoyed this.*S* Mike |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Yes, it's obvious that you put a lot of thought into this one! I like your vision of what happens when we sleep! Good Job! |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thank you, Romy.*S* Mike |
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