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Jellyfish Tale(senryu)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2001-05-25 01:24 PM

Vast expanse of sea~
white plastic bag floats along
Dragged against its will

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-05-26 08:49 AM

Those things give me the "creeps". I avoid the shore in late August and early September, the ocean seems full of them at that time for some reason.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-05-26 04:54 PM

Deep, very deep.
I enjoyed this very much. Wow.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-05-26 11:50 PM

Kaile~
Well-crafted and very inspirational ...

Caught up in the tide
Rolling out across the waves
Far removed from shore

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2001-05-27 04:20 AM

javier, now that is another of my backpacking experiences...i am rather ashamed to admit that i have never seen a jellyfish before and when i first saw it, i actually thought it was a plastic bag instead

marge, many thanks for your poetic response...i love it when someone sees something in my writing and then writes about it

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

5 posted 2001-05-30 02:28 PM

Kai, very good - from Viet Nam trip? I did not expect this to be about ocean trash - you got me. Panne

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

6 posted 2001-05-31 07:56 PM

Yes, Jellyfish really do look like that..watch out for the sting!!

kitkat
Senior Member

since 2000-01-11

Posts 878
Nova Scotia

7 posted 2001-06-06 08:59 AM

Nice image. They do look like plastic bags...

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kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2001-06-06 10:32 AM

panne, now thats another coool way of looking at it...

yup this is from Vietnam trip...

thank you Songbird and kitkat, now i don't feel that silly...

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