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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10

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King of Prussia, PA USA

0 posted 2002-09-21 06:12 PM

This first Waltz of Fall
Leaves twirling in harmony
Autumns melody

Stil the garden lush
leaves dance upon her petals
Summer Fall duet

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

deleeme
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since 1999-10-09

Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA

1 posted 2002-09-21 06:55 PM

Dear Ellie,
What a lovely scene--a brief and friendly interlude--a cordial dance between the two seasons as one prepares to take a bow and the other assumes the dance floor as a solo.

interesting & delightful,
david

Every Day's a Blessing
And Gift-Wrapped from Above,
Share it with another
And Spread the Father's Love!!!

May You come to Know His Best Blessing

Miah
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since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2002-09-21 10:25 PM

What a beautiful way to put it. I love this.

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-09-22 02:20 AM

Your music is lovely Ellie. Joyce

CHILI
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since 2002-09-08

Posts 244

4 posted 2002-09-22 02:57 AM

Ellie, this paints a pretty picture.Thanks for sharing.

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2002-09-22 08:54 AM

Auturmn is my favorite season and you brought it to life

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

TradingSpaces19
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since 2002-08-31

Posts 134
Arvada, Colorado

6 posted 2002-09-22 01:46 PM

this sounds good and it is a good poem but it's more like something a little kid would write.

Andrea

pegasus111
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since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

7 posted 2002-09-25 07:04 AM

I can hear the music. Lovely Fairie princess..

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-09-25 04:48 PM

ellie: Beautiful images, as usual!

Betty Lou Hebert

Street Heart
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since 2002-09-05

Posts 349
Pennsylvania,USA

9 posted 2002-09-25 11:08 PM

Very beautiful,exuding peacefulness.I liked this very much.

thank you,Ellie

Geoffrey

A. L. Becker
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since 2002-09-06

Posts 167
San Francisco, California

10 posted 2002-09-26 08:44 PM

dear ellie, this is a wonderful Haiku. i love the twirling image.
annie!

"Oh, do not ask, 'What is it?'
Let us go and make our visit."
-Eliot

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

11 posted 2002-09-27 08:37 AM

Thanks. You write such pretty images.

Thanks,
Melton

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

12 posted 2002-09-29 02:38 AM

A beautiful description of the meeting of the seasons.. a unique way of thinking about it >a duet. Great piece of writing.

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