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My Love

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

0 posted 2002-08-01 03:56 AM

A rainbow is the color of my love,
a starry night the view.
A spring rain the feel of it,
the scent of my love is you.

The voice of my love is touch,
the taste is that of candy.
A diamond is the strength of it,
the warmth is that of brandy.

The sun is the truth of my love,
and the gentle weight is dew,
a rainbow is the color and,
the scent, my love is you.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2002-08-01 02:30 PM

A rainbow is the color of my love,
a starry night the view.
A spring rain the feel of it,
the scent of my love is you.
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A diamond is the strength of it,
the warmth is that of brandy.

The sun is the truth of my love,
and the gentle weight is dew,
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This is so poetically pretty...in its imagery, its expression, its phrasing and personification and its cadence. Twas a treat to read aloud.
I was scrolling "todays topics" and saw your name...is good to read you again and have you visit.
well done poetess.

take care
jm

Tell me we belong together
Dress it up with the trappings of love
Ill be captivated, Ill hang from your lips
Instead of the heartache from above

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2002-08-01 05:40 PM

childomine: This is a lovely poem and I greatly enjoyed it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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