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Dancing Droplets of Love |
Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Dancing Droplets of Love Through a meadow in thy darkest corner of mine being, I’ve seen dancing droplets of love kissing blades of you. If only thine illusion be a vision of futuristic harmony, Then thy longing empty arms of us, a memory of thine past. I wake thy morning dew droplets quietly singing our song, Choir of angelic crickets acknowledging distance fading. Mine soul lost within itself, lacking thine essence of truth. Love of mine heart can thou forgive and forget thine darkness? |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
fair maiden this is wonderfully written some beautiful lines If only thine illusion be a vision of futuristic harmony, Then thy longing empty arms of us, a memory of thine past. "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Esmeralda, Thou hast created thus a poetic dream only lovers darest dream..Exquisite! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sooooooo beautiful, Esmeralda! |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
Well...I really don't know what to say about this, but it is really powerful. *+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~ |
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