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Summer's Desire
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Summer's Desire |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
~Summer's Desire~ Music plays ... our bodies sway ... summer breezes tease our skin. Sand in my hair ... here on a dare ... feeling the glow of your touch within. Starlit skies ... moonlit eyes ... consumed in anticipation of this embrace. Candles burn ... our bodies yearn ... shadows dance upon your tanned, amazing face. Taste and kiss ... know this bliss ... we've longed for this moment in time. Come to me ... this is meant to be ... your many pleasures so sublime. Secrets shared ... confessions spared ... contentment flows so pure and sweet. Midnight desire ... feel this fire ... together we conduct heat. Gentle lips on mine ... so divine ... I surrender to your touch. Cant fight fate ... this need too great ... I've never wanted any one before ... so much. Take me there ... all that I am, I share ... of your offerings I am bound. Love and lust ... held in trust ... true ecstasy finally found. Janet Marie **repost from open 6... me muse is on holiday AGAIN darn temper-mental muse)  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Janet, I loved this so much. It just seems to dance, and it's so gentle, yet so fiery. I think I just may have to print this one...wonderful work. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
It's still lovely!! Take that muse to a movie..or a museum..or something...don't make me come over there and give your muse a lecture!  |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Get a room! Sexy without being bawdy.. very nice. jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Oh those summer breezes ... you caught this thought quite well  Rex}>{{{{o> |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Janet~ this is so good, I'd say your muse deserves the break I didn't read this in 6 or at least I don't think I did, at any rate I loved it now!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
See why I LOVE summer Great work girl, I don't think I had caught this one the first time by so my thanks to your missing muse |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
JM- i haven't stopped by in a while. i've had cousins in town and such, not to mention sharing your problem of a misplaced muse. =) but i stopped in and guess whose topic's on top? thanks for reposting. i like this a lot. it catches summer romance in the palm of it's hand. i thought of the song "summer nights" during the first few lines. We all got our demons. We all got somethin' to atone for. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Oh wow JM....with your muse inspiring things as gorgeous as this, I think it's ok for her to go on vacation now and then, don't you think? The best of the best need their rest, afterall....a beautiful piece here. *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
uh, Janet Marie, I seem to have misplaced you address! Would you send it again, PLEASE?????? (In other words, I LOVE this poem!)  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
LOL at jamie ..."get a room" me bawdy? well, only by request LOLLOL at Balladeer... you dont need my addy deer... just come find me on the beach thanks guys...I guess your right me muse does need a break from me now and then.. lately she been calling in on a lot of sick days... me thinks shes faking and at the beach later sweet-poet gator jm< !signature--> you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 06-28-2000).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
beautiful Jan, very romantic. Makes me want to run bare foot through the sand and surf getting sand In-between my toes. Only problem is that the nearest beach is 60 miles away  wonderful poem. "monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I don't care if your muse is on holidays.....I like this one! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
JM, call me selfish if you like, but I'm glad your muse is on holiday otherwise I'd have missed this lovely poem Eric. "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
jm--if only you could bring back time and live this wonderful poem again...so sensual it is, er were...really liked!! |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Words so sweet and smooth like the touch of a feather. This flows so well that is turns into song....what sweet music two lovers make. ~~nice writing~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
downright inspirational ,me twin...now I'm going to have to go digging through the archives to see what else I've missed...who loves ya? me loves ya...later-lusty-gator! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Can't imagine how I missed this one ... love the summer love theme ! I think I found your muse playing in the rain tonight ... have dried her off and sent her home with a *HUG*. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I do so love to dig around and find ones such as this. This encompasses my dreams so well that I have new found hope in it one day becoming a reality for me. Loved it much. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sultry summer days and the man you love...what more is there? never say never |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully penned with such passion Janet Marie! Tantalizing read indeed! Loved it! Best wishes, /Kit |
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