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Held Within Your Arms
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Held Within Your Arms ~*Marge Tindal*~ I know that you will be here when the sun has lost it's light You will hold and comfort me to make it all seem right Hold me close and tell me that everything is okay Just a moment of caring caresses the sadness away Held within your arms suspended in your thoughts I know that I am loved, that's true I'd gladly give all of my tomorrows just to be loved by you |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Good morning, Marge "Oh" this sounds like a good feeling to me, and you say it so lovely my dear. Love, Cerenity |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Marge~ A romantic poem at it's best!  "I'd gladly give all of my tomorrows just to be loved by you" Beautiful Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Held within your arms suspended in your thoughts I know that I am loved, that's true I'd gladly give all of my tomorrows just to be loved by you .... Aw, So romantically penned... Delightful reading as always, Marge... regards, sudhir |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely, Marge!!! Your poems are poetry at its best! Keep em' coming, see?!!  Love ya!!! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ My dear, it is so good to read one of your poems again. I am sorry to have been gone for such a long time. For a little while there, my class had just about gotten the better of me with the workload. I had to put in a little extra time to maintain that 100 average I started out with. But you know me, I couldn't stay gone forever. And what a beautiful poem to be welcomed back to! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Such a great feeling that is expressed here.. thanks for sharing...it gives me hope....  Julie :) |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Well said. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ I bet that is a wonderful feeling my friend. Nice writing. LW Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Thank you. It's a wonderful feeling for sure. Melissa~ Thank you, honey. Sudhir~ I am so pleased you like. Lil' Lizzie~ I love you ! Now .... post that beauty you sent me today ! TerryW~ Hey you ! Glad you're back - for sure ! Congrats on the 100 average ! Way to go ! JulieAnn~ To give you hope is a wonderful feeling for this poet. Thank you. Prometheus~ Thanks. LoneWolf~ Just the best feeling for sure. Thanks hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, the embrace of those arms with so much luv they give you your poetry is so refreshing and sweet brings me a smile and keeps me on my feet! Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
CocoBaci~ I adore the refreshing sincerity of your replies. Thanks, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
beautiful poem,marge |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ You're such a little sweetie ! Always in here plundering the archives. What a joy to see you ! Peek-A-Boo, my friend. Thanks for being here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Just read this beautiful poem and scrolled thru the replies eager to get to the bottom to click on reply and find I already have! No fair!! Well, I love this poem..reckon it deserves two replies any day!! Great one, Marge!! Love and hugs, Lil' Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Precious girl ! One reply from you is never enough ! LOL @ You !  Sending *HUGS* .... all the way to England ! LOve ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another Marge beauty here |
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