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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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I found pardon in one countless heart, and I was silvered naked. I covered heartaches wary garden, freed not of feeling, and chanced the cowboys pages, granting their selves memory. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi redheart angerbraids, First of all welcome to passions I have not been around a whole lot lately, now this poem sound really wonderful but I am not sure exactly what it means and I would love to know, I think I know some of what you are trying to say, if you could explain it because some times im way off and make a fool of myself in the process. Thank you, Cerenity |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
What makes this piece intriguing to me is not so much the words spoken, but the tone in which they resound -- very conversational -- reminds me almost of Frost, save the free meter. I agree with Cerenity -- though I would not beg an explanation, I believe that much of this could be read in several different ways. --Kess YOUR LIFE IS A TEST It is only a test ... If this were your Actual Life, you would have been given better instructions! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Glad I stopped in to read. Interesting effort. I enjoyed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I found this quite beautiful,redheart--- no explanations necessary. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Just a few words tha can be interpeted in so many ways.....I think I feel waht you are trying to put accross....i feel heartache?? a little remorse?? a lot of mixed emotion?? am I right....sorry if I am not...it was very nice work though....  |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
hello to all, and thank you so for all the comments, as you may have noticed if you have read any other words I've writen, most of it is out there and filled with many different relations, so is this one, when i write i don't have an ulitamte subject, because i relate all things as chain reaction to our selves and each object, how ever, after i wrote this it said to me that i have, found exceptance in some one whose heart is so dear to me that counting it as any other would not redeem its consitant beauty, being silvered naked, in a sense is being put forth honestly, yet with my tattered self of scars and having been before with others, realming me silver, instead of gold, (which i love silver over gold, though i love gold equally). I chose to cover the wary garden, so it wouldn't blind me from truth in another. no guilt. covering: letting it exist, yet sheilding it from effecting some thing beautiful, like bugs eating your garden they will go but you have to know what to do and they'll always be about. Freed not of feeling, because no matter what you do you will always feel, something from some where reminding you or allowing you to remember you feel. Chancing the cowboys pages, meaning going ahead even though, his pages- reflections of him self, his life, his own tramma of events, taking them into account and realizing how he has allowed him self memory with his pages, with his forwardness, his open book of a face, helped me, let go and remember and not get dusted with every passing thought. any how i really hope my on going explaination did'n confuse ya'll any more, i'm realy gratful for all the coments, i just love getting comments, i really should be more actiive in giving them, i'm real sorry i haven't been lately, i'm a busy mom, but i will, even if its just a cheesy little note, i know that those always makee me feel good. thank you all so much Kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
redheart--you will not believe this--but I understood this one...thank you so much for sharing it... |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
oh my gosh, i totaly new you would after reading crash and burn, i think we will understand alot of what we write. thank you so much. kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
interesting intriguing read...thanx for your explanation...i enjoyed  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Neat poem....thanks for the explanation! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i know i sure did get in to the explaination huh? sorry all, i just discover it myself some times, thank you for all the inspiring and kind remarks. Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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