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A Long Kiss
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A Long Kiss |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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A long kiss on the lips with love all around you, like gentle touching blossoms soft and wet, is filled with a nectar to drug and blind you, bringing glowing hypnotic waves from the chest. A long kiss savoured is insanity flavoured; a craving for dreamers to taste the prize for yeilding hearts that send all human reason adrift in circles of love in the mind. A long kiss speaks, but not words you can conquer. A long kiss sings, but not songs you can sing. A long kiss sails on the windsongs of matter caught up in the flight of an alien on wing. A long kiss can torch your heart to continue burning with fire long after it's over a flame left roaring deep within you a molten addiction invading the sober. A long kiss can heal diminished duende a soothing connection for those with a gift. And words can't flatter those few precious moments when there's time to enjoy true love from within. Celtrue2000@E3B1G9 |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ethome, Great discription of a long kiss. They are wonderful, aren't they? It is like heaven on earth with one you love. So soft and sensual. Great writing!!  Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...what is consided long? Five minutes....five hours. I am waiting for that long kiss. I love kissing...of course it has to be with the right one. James |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
~Ethome beautifully expressed. long kisses truly are all this and more. wonderful poem. take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
(sighs) How beautiful you describe the long kiss. Makes me long for one myself "burning with fire long after its over" my favorite line. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh, I feel I have been kissed by the dew of a rose...Your poem made me want one of these long kisses...with the meaning and love behind it!!!Too bad you can't buy them! I guess I'll have to wait for mine! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A long kiss can heal diminished duende a soothing connection for those with a gift. And words can't flatter those few precious moments when there's time to enjoy true love from within. ------------- *sigh*... oh yes me friend ...you say it all with this line>> "bringing glowing hypnotic waves from the chest."<<< loooove that feeling... lovely, tasty poem you have penned here. later-lip-gator  jm And it's good that I'm not angry, I just need to get over, I'm not angry, anymore Cry when you cry, run when you run, love when you love, represent the ashes that you leave behind ~MB20~ "What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly" ~Lao Tze Tao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks to - Lone Wolf, jmlee12345, Aimster, kitkat, A Romantic Heart, Janet Marie. I appreciate your comments so much. I will be visiting you soon! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful poem, wonderful. someone kiss me, sorry your poem just got me in the mood, I guess I will have to get the mirror and the lip stick out. lol ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. manic street preachers "Culture Alienation Borebom and Despair" "I know I believe in nothing but it is my nothing" -faster MSP "And you see, I kind of shiver to conformity Did you see, the way I cower to authority, you see And my life, it's a series of compromises anyway It's a sham, and I'm conditioned to accept it all, you see" six by Paul Draper. ----- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ethome, I missed this the first time around...thank goodness these are not purged, ever! What a wonderful piece of work...left me warm and, well, really warm, really, really warm...  Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Brian for your upbuilding comments. Thank you Sunshine for just being so warm. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ethome~ this is soooooo romantic! Kissing your love should ALWAYS be like this, even the quick ones!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Mmmmmmmm.. Long kisses are so wonderful. *sigh* Yes they are soooooo wonderful. *sigh* Oops! Sorry! I got carried away here.  Um yes you really expressed it beautifully ethome. kat |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Where's the Bride?? I want to give her a good long kiss. Lovely Poem! jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
They are the best ones now aren't they? I suddenly find myself wanting one. Great expression and a masterpiece of a tribute to one of the sweetest gifts of a love. |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
 Whew!! Someone call 911...it's smokin' in here! Great poem! Marie~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Sea for dropping in to read and for the comments. Thank you kat for your kind words. Thank you Prometheus for stopping to comment, much appreciated. Thanks Mark Bohannan for your comments. Thank you marie66 for enjoying the poem and your final comment. Glad it affected you that way. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I went searching and what did I find? A kiss to tantalize and tempt my mind.....WOW ethome... never say never |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paula you are such a sweetheart I don't know what to say except thank you for doing this.. ethome... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thanks for reminding |
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