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In My Mind . . .
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In My Mind . . . |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
In my mind I escape this room Where silence is entombed In my mind I see the light On this perfect night In my mind I close my eyes Taking on another guise In my mind I dream of tomorrow Swallowing tears of sorrow In my mind I feel your touch The memory's too much In my mind The anger is gone Peace awakens with the dawn Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jenn...in my mind...where all good things dwell...you hold a special place...this is lovely never say never |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LW~ This is really great.  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Jenn, Glad to see you writing of happier times to come. As you know right now I am an emotional wreck. Thanks for giving me this small glimpse of hope |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
The mind is a very powerful thing. After the heart has ruled for so long, sometimes it is best to let the mind take over. Good expression of emotions here Jenn. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
In my mind, Words from your pen flow, Provoking thoughts that, a path, show. Lone Wolf.... An excellent poem here putting forth the emotions with right measure... regards, sudhir |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Peace awakens with the dawn.... Perfect wording but... (when?) A great poem!!!! I mean it |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Such a beautiful piece LW So glad the anger has eased and you are slowly finding piece. *HUG* Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This holds such an inspirational feeling Lone Wolf ... all things heal with time, and peace will come eventually ... wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ 'In my mind' ... I go to the meadow ! Lovely, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
L.W.* Stunning work my friend.....this says so much and gives hope of a better tomorrow. Take care ***AW Hugs*** |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
I like the style of this one! Keep finding peace, Jenn. And keep writing 'em, they're great! |
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jefsand Junior Member
since 2000-07-15
Posts 18 |
Everyday is a new day, and a fresh start! I really liked this poem. Just when your feeling alone, you find out what a small world it really is. jefsand |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Paula . . . Thank you, you have a special place in mine as well. SEA . . . Thank you!! Jeff . . . There are always happier times, my friend. You will see. I know it is a tough time for you. Happy to give you some hope. Marina . . .Yes, it is very powerful. The heart can take no more. Thank you. Sudhir . . . What a lovely stanza!! Thank you very much. There is a path there. I will find it. Linda . . . Thanks. When? Very soon. Happy you enjoyed it. Tracie . . . Yes, peace will soon be at hand. **HUGS** Thank you my friend!! Kit . . . Yes, they do and I know it will. Thanks. Marge . . . The meadow is awesome my friend!! hehe. Been playing with that phrase for some time now. Glad I finally got something to show for it. BDC . . . Thank you!! It says a lot doesn't it. WE will get there my friend. I just know it.  Trew . . . Thanks, I will keep writing as long as you and all these wonderful people keep reading them!! I appreciate the comments. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
OOPS!!!!! Ceres got me!!!  [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
CUT THAT OUT CERES!!!!!!!! ROFL Sorry everyone!! [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 07-21-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Lone Wolf, in my mind I'm glad you are posting your wonderful flowing compositions here.....This is very well done with that old haunting memory coming round again....... take care......ethome |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Jenn, Glad you felt you had to thank us 3 times  LMAO |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ethome . . . Thank you very much as I am glad you post here too. Jeff . . . HOW'D THAT HAPPEN?? ROFL.  Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Wonderful poem. The theme is excellent, something I never thought of, but peace always comes in the end Very beautiful Liz |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Liz, Thank you for reading. Just came to me one day and I finally did something with it. Yes, peace always comes in the end. So true. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Lone Wolf, this has to be my favourite poem of all yours! (of the ones I have read) Hehe, sorry, I haven't replied to most of them, but I have read more than I let on.. *_^ I love this.. "In my mind.." I really think you should submitt this one for the book.. I like this better than your My Heart Hears one that u submitted (nono, that one is good too, hehe.. just this is better.. *_^) Loved this!! Luv, Lynne "He who knows others is wise; he who knows himself is enlightened." Lao-tsu |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
LW, what a powerful piece. Thank goodness that the mind can finally take over the heart when needed. Truly beautiful writing. Juls |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Lone Wolf~ My friend, this is just wonderful. I love it! Thank yo for sharing it with me. Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Yu Lan . . . Thanks, I will consider that. Juls . . . I agree 100%!!! Thank you for the reply. Terry . . . You are welcome my friend!! Happy to share!!! Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so tell me how you did it |
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