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Heartbreak (repost from #6)
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Heartbreak (repost from #6) |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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I will find you you cannot hide I'll take you along for the ride You are simply a pawn in my master plan Your life will never be the same again I can find you in the darkest of places I can turn cold even the warmest embraces You cannot hide from the terror I bring Get on your mark I'm ready to spring I'm not always sent from somewhere above If you haven't yet guessed my name is...... HEARTBREAK All my love, Jeffrey |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jeffrey....such pain where does it come from |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Paula, This doesn't even begin to describe the pain I was feeling at the time. All my love, Jeffrey |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey, Powerful and moving poem my friend. Thanks for reposting it. Loved it. I am sure the pain was tremandous for you. Happy tht you have moved on though. Wonderful!!  LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh Jeff, I really liked this one. Heartbreak is a scary thing because you never really know when it's coming. And there is no preparation for it. Though I'm sorry for the pain that inspired it, this is a wonderful piece. --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Sounds as though we have drank from the same cup Jeffrey. Very powerful piece. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~OUCH!!! Jeffrey,...well done with this one. Wow,...it sort of sticks you with it...right where it hurts...(the heart of course). hehe. This is so well done,...it's almost scary. Take care. *Peace. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
You pen your emotions well my friend. Marina It is blessing to have wings for your words, and passion to flow from pen. Marina Crossley |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Oh Jeffrey, I know this feeling well, this really hit home with me.. I'm glad you posted this piece again. "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Jeffrey~ I remember this one. It holds just as much power now as it did the first time I read it. You have a wonderful gift for poetry, my friend! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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