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touch not the cat
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touch not the cat |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Touch not the cat Tis a warning fairly given The wounds she inflicts Cut straight to the heart Touch not the cat Hunter heed this advice She cares not who she bites In her own hunger and her pain Touch not the cat Your heart you will hold forfeit And will all be for naught In the endless hours before dawn Touch not the cat You will spend forever regreting The sacrifice you made to her pain For you cannot touch her soul |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Interesting, and I read more into it than there seemed to be.  Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Like Temptress, perhaps I read more into than I should,,,almost sounds like give up. Very well written |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Might I ask... is this poem aimed at a single person or to a group in general...( i am curious as a cat..sorry about the bad pun) also thank you for your kind words on my poem |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Prometheus, Well when the words started coming I was thinking of one person...and the pain he had caused...a warning was given... You write beautifully...love laced with pain |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
one more time thru please |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Wisdom indeed never trust a cat, they seem so friendly..only when they want to though. really enjoyed the poem. I have 3 cats at home and two dogs, I always get worried when they cats want paly means they are after something, lol, "Death makes angels of us all and put wings where we once had shoulders, smooth as raven's wings. Jim Morrison |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Brian....lmao...the cat isnt the one who did wrong |
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bad little dog Junior Member
since 2000-07-08
Posts 38city pound |
trust me I never touch cats nice poem |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool poem paula... cat scratch fever seems like an appropriate payback  well written jm |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Cool baby-- I know of the cat and I did touch. Not anymore..  I'm outta here.[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 07-09-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Bad Little Dog....hehehe...cats be bad Janet...yeah we need to inflict that fever Mark...glad you like it babe...and you know I would never hurt you. |
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