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Melody Of My Heart
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Melody Of My Heart |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Melody Of My Heart~*Marge Tindal*~Melody of my heart play me a simple song One that takes me back to his arms where I belong An oldie from the past that just won't go away Croon for me a simple tune as he sang for me that day Tickle for me the ivory as he played me from the start Cradle me on music's shoulder draw the bow across my heart Pluck the strings of memory within the chambers of my soul Play for me a simple song that ever will grow old Tympani touch now rising Crescendo met with grace Conduct for me a symphony to ever-stir this place Blow me low in tones of blue Infuse me with melodic hue Expel harmonic tunes cradled in tender hands Play for me a melody Strike up the band ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah Marge, you make me wanna dance all night! Your words are always music to my heart. Oh, you have a powerful gift...the ability to transport people to a more melodic and peaceful place.  --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Marge, your poetry always sings to my heart. I loved the magical flow of this! I feel that this should be a book submission, it's so well written. But, then again, I've come to expect no less from a gem like you Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
For sharing all your lovely words, I will play for thee a song it may not be the sound of birds but of my heart it did belong Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Do-re-mi-fa-sol-la-ti...let's all sing along, guys! Beautiful, Marge! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Music to my eyes my margie-gator... a wonderful melody... and where do you keep that rainbow of amazing colors ... such lovely presentation. like I always say...queen of graphics  jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel What lovely compliments you pay me - when all I do is pen the songs my heart sings. Thank you. Melissa Thank you, honey. Perhaps another book - another time. Prometheus A song from your heart is all I need. Thank you for the rhyme of your reply. Elizabeth And melodic it is - a chorus of poets ! JanetMarie The rainbow of colors is found in the songs sung from my heart to yours. Love you all ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Just wonderful Marge. . . Reminds me of a series that I did back in Open #6 and Dark #1 (4 of them I think) all with this opening line. . . Excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I love being in the orchestra pit looking up at you when you conduct...  |
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MagnoliaBlue Member
since 2000-05-12
Posts 367 |
Just such lovely music here! MagnoliaBlue ~My Skipper Jim I love you! Your Lady June~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely, Marge!! My heart is humming along! Love and hugs, Your Lil' Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Tickle for me the ivory as he played me from the start Cradle me on music's shoulder draw the bow across my heart Now this is what I call superb imagery and rhyme....absolutely love your poem Marge(y), and this verse is just the one that grabs me... hugs K |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge....... One should always start the day with a song from the heart, and yours was lovely! ~~~Thank you~~~ Paint your words upon the eager waiting canvas of my heart.....~Sunny1~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Not that long ago Marge you had me dancing, now you have me singing. Great work!God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just stopped by to re-read this one. I really liked it alot and will probably be back to it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven I remember a couple of yours from the forum. Nice to know you like. MarkB LOL ! Glad to have you in the audience. MagnoliaBlue Pleased to know you enjoyed. Lil' Lizzie I love knowing I set a heart humming. Thanks, little friend. Kamla Doesn't surprise me that you would choose my favorite line ! Thank you. Sunny1 Music from the heart starts the day off just right ! Thank you. EagleOne Hey ! Let's take this show on the road !  MarkB< ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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