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If I were a poet(for my 500th post)
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If I were a poet(for my 500th post) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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If I were a poet, I would pen down in words Those indescribable feelings that play hide and seek If I were a poet, I would reflect my experiences Refreshingly honest and true so that others may learn If I were a poet, I would compose real funny gems Poetic clowns they would be Mending broken hearts I hope so If I were a poet, I would write dark poetry Venting black feelings of pain and anguish Catharsis treatment for my parched soul If I were a poet, I would record down today As a poetic journal entry Memories aglow, I hold dear If I were a poet, But alas! I have a long way to go May my muse guide me along and maybe someday I'll be one <@><@><@><@><@><@><@><@?><@><@><@><@><@><@><@><@><@> Finally i have arrived!!Hurray!!   If i may, can i have a 500th post wish:to read my A Poet's Tragedy(a senyru i am really proud of) in Open#8...eager for more comments here now off to read more poems from you all [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 06-25-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Congratulations, Kaile~ You are certainly a poet. We all learn from reading others and sharing the great gift of writing. Again, my congratulations ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Very well writen and congrats, hope to see more...... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i agree great work love the piece. as you have read Blow free you ask a question so i must answer. see i walk around all day and see people trying to be like everyone else and i don't understand it so they don't understand me for being my self i follow my heart like you said which is every evil all set on death and such. but i hate it when people lie to who they really are i think the world would be better if people were themselves and we did go to war. for the war part only because there are to many people on earth today and one room to put them without destroying more land. well thanks for reading alot of my work and all your kind replies. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Congratulations kaile!!! You are indeed a poet my frined. . . a very good one at that!!! This just shows your gift. . . please continue to share it with us all!! Excellent!! -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Kaile, Hats off to you my friend, WOW! 500 post and you've only just begun to charm us with your WONDERFUL work. CONGRATULATIONS! Looking forward to your next 500! Dennis :^) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Congratulations on your 500th post. Your work is " treatment for my parched soul ", Looking foreward to reading more. Olias |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thanx all for your KIND replies! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
If I were a poet, I would hope my bared soul Touches notches in hearts aplenty Appreciating approvingly my hard work lots sorry...cant resist myself |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
I agree with Marge, only a poet could write such a wonderful poem. Happy 500th. A rock pile ceases to be a rock pile the moment a single man contemplates it, bearing within him the image of a cathedral. Antoine de Saint-Exupéry |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this, Kaile!!! You are definitely a poet!!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Kaile, looks like I'm a little late in my congratulations, coz you've been through 6 500th posts... This poem looks real good! And the journal entry that you wrote in your poem made me sit up straight wondering how come you were familiar with accounting terms. Then I realised you were talking about the kinda journal one writes down stories about what happens everyday  Congrats again! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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