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Poetry's Beauty Tanka(inspired by Melissa Honeybee)
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Poetry's Beauty Tanka(inspired by Melissa Honeybee) |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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5-7-5-7-7 Inanimate words On impersonal paper Yet awesome power To touch strangers who don't meet Setting blaze their hearts and souls |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a truthful way to describe poetry! Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It takes me lines and lines to say what I want to say and yet in these few lines you have said so very much!! Perfect description of poetry at its finest!! Well done, thank you for sharing this~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Very nicely done Tanka.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Kaile~ I am flattered that I inspired you to write this with my tanka about poetry, a compliment which I am shocked to receive, I don't really consider myself a talented poet like all the other amazing ones here, but thank you nonetheless. You'll receive your check in the mail soon for that compliment LOL  I love this tanka, what a refreshing look at how poetry makes one feel and how it can bring people together with it's power! I love the last two lines: "to touch strangers who don't meet setting blaze their heart and souls" Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Kaile Thank You sooooo much for your wonderful thoughts on "Ode to Poem" that I posted in The Pub!! This is a cute poem!! I do like it!! I like your poetry, it is usually short, cute, and to the point!! You should check out my webpage and read "These Three Short and Sweet"!! I think you might enjoy them!! Anywayz, Thank You!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
we'll i'm still here reading all of your work that i can find and it all is good i love it so. i also wrote a poem for all poets called poets look for it only posting of it is still open but i forget where. and love bug i'm still sorry that i posted more then once i just wanted all the poets to read it so so sorry. love your work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you Elizabeth,Butterflies_don't_cry,Marge,Melissa,Justbleu and Jeremiah for reading and responding bringing this up again with another Poetry Beauty Haiku Palette of colours~ Nature casts his vibrant spell~ Poetry Beauty! |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I like "to touch strangers who don't meet"... I think that's what poetry is _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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