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When You Walk My Way
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When You Walk My Way |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When You Walk My Way ~*Marge Tindal*~ When you walk my way I watch your green eyes Reliving the moment Caught up in our sighs With easy-remembering a smile plays on my lips The haunting memory of your fingertips Tracing the words whispering my name Never before Never again When you walk my way my heart catches you Forever here Forever new ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh Marge, Wow - You just never cease to amaze me, this is so perfectly beautiful. Bonnie |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Marge~ Girl, you've done it again, an excellent poem as always. To me, it's different than your usual poems, in a sense that there is a sadness, but a great hope at the end. Actually, right now this is how I feel - this week has been devastating, so thank you for writing this well expressed poem. Your talent amazes me. Shakespeare's got nothin' on you  Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marge, this is sweet .. never before never again .. forever here forever new I adore this verse  Coco |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sweet, sad, romantic...and a lovely verse! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Marge, I have run out of words to describe how beautiful your poetry is!! Every poem of yours has its own special magic and this one is no exception. Wonderful!!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ Sigh . . . When you write these words You make my heart smile Most beautiful I've heard In a long long while You always seems to say What is on my mind Each and every day I seek and then I find Your poetry amazes me Always seems to flow I hope you too can see The seeds you have sewn This is lovely my friend. Really beautiful words. Still see that hope... Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Marge, this is so beautiful. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSC~ Bonnie, thank you, hon for your nice replies. Melissa~ Sorry you found it sad ... perhaps what you are going through made it appear so. Now don't be going and swelling my head with that 'Willie' stuff ! LOL !  CocoBaci~ Thank you for the adoration. The phrases you chose are also important to me. Martie~ Thank you, my friend. Not meant to be 'sad' ... just romantic. Lil' Lizzie~ Well now - for a gal 'out of words' you sure did a bang-up job of letting me know you like it ! Have I told you today that I love ya' ? Well - I DO ! LoneWolf~ Your poetic response touched me deeply. I always think that someone's heart sends me the thoughts that I write - nice to know you find them to your liking. Sowing seeds for you is A-Okay with me ! Elizabeth~ I'm pleased that you find it beautiful. I love to think in shades of 'beauty'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lorraine Nisbet Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 218Jersey City, NJ USA |
WOW!! How wonderfully romantic!! (Added to my, love this one, Marge! list) ~Lorraine A great poet is nothing more....than a discovered amateur |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Marge, this is so beautiful, and yet so sad. I can relate to it very well. I hope you have better luck in the future! "We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars." -Oscar Wilde "The robbed that smiles steals something from the thief" -Shakespea |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem!!!!!! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lorraine~ Thank you for seing the sheer 'romance' in this piece. LoveBug~ Honey, it isn't sad at all - I promise. It is meant to reflect the joy of seeing someone you love come toward you and losing yourself in the wonder of - 'When you walk my way my heart catches you Forever here Forever new' *HUGS* to you. VanDana~ I love knowing that you're here, doll ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Marge, lovely poem as always!! funny how the others find this sad but i have read this as a person who is reliving the moment and the sheer magic when he first met his love....a fascinating Love at First Sight moment that is most beautiful and is in a class of its own--unmatched by others interesting to see how this poem means differently to different people |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Gee, Marge, when I walk your way those high heels really hurt, the pantyhose pulls at the hairs on my legs and my hips hurt from swaying back and forth.....but I sure do get a lot of whistles! In order to keep a true perspective of one's importance, everyone should have a dog that will worship him and a cat that will ignore him. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kaile~ Thank you for your insight, my friend. Interpretation is a neat thing, is it not? Guess that's why we write. Love the different views - and speaking of DIFFERENT VIEWS ! ! See Balladeer ! Only you would think to say that you walk in such a way Silly fellow now you behave The hairy legs you should SHAVE ! Can't do much about the hips But, boy I'd whistle for those lips ! Love you, bad boy ! ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful, Marge! This just about sums up love! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ Thank you, hon. It just about sums it up to me too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, I have run out of words to describe your poetry. All I know is I look forward to always seeing the name Marge Tindal attached and I know if will be a beauty, such as this. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eloise~ I thank you from the bottom of my poetic heart. A poet couldn't ask for sweeter praise than what you have given me. I love what I do and I'm glad it shows. Bless you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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star216 Junior Member
since 2000-06-26
Posts 11 |
Very beautiful poem!!! I loved it. I can't wait to read more of your poems. [This message has been edited by star216 (edited 06-26-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge such sweet words of harmony you have written here. To walk your way would be a pleasure I bet luv ya Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
As lovely as lovely can get... Marge, this is another beautiful poem from you...sometimes I feel I should give up writing... regards, sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Star~ Thank you, hon. I hope you enjoy them all. Tracie~ Awwwwwwwwwwww ! How sweet of you. Sudhir~ Merci, my friend. Never, ever give up writing. I appreciate your words of praise .... let inspiration from others fill your heart with words of splendor. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^}, HUGS, my green eyed friend... Sunny ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I love the little sweet picture this created!! I need to just face the fact I'm in love with love!! Loved this piece, Marge!! You write lovely poetry!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Just beautiful and a little sad....nice work Julie :) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ *Hugs* back at you, gal ! JustBleu~ Thanks, hon. 'In love with love' ? ME TOO ! JulieAnn~ Glad you enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge~ That I find your thoughts to my liking is an understatement!!! They are wonderful!! Perhaps some of them come from my heart? Keep up the grat work. Glad to see you do not mind sewing the seeds!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ It is such a pleasure to know that what I write finds it's way to your heart. Sharing thoughts is what it's all about, isn't it ? Thank you, my friend for enjoying what gives me such pleasure to do. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Marge: This was so beautiful! You really touched my heart with this one. I love your work. kat |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kat~ Thank you so much for the wonderful compliment. I appreciate you letting me know. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ I think everything you write is fantastic! This is soooooo goooood! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Lovey one Marge! sweet too. I enjoyed this! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ I like your smile, my friend. WhiteDove~ Appreciate you - I do ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ You have taken my breath away again! You WILL NEVER CEASE to amaze me, dear! I only wish that I had half of your talent! Love Ya, Dearie~~~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TerryW~ Oh, love ... you just made my night ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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