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Life Is What You Make It.......
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Life Is What You Make It....... |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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*Ok, this is probably dorky but I hope you like it  I went down to the beach sat in the sand and like my life I watched it slip through my hand From no where a little girl came zipping by "Time to build a castle!" she said in a joyous cry She looked at me and asked with a smile if I would help her for a little while With patience and laughter we built a castle made of sand "I've never seen one finer or quite so grand!" I looked over to where she was and no little girl did I see But an Angel~MY Angel~ and she spoke these words to me............ "Life is what you make it, and it can slip through your hand or like our castle with patience and laughter it can be grand!" -SEA- Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
SEA - Dorky??? I think not! This is so precious, I just love it. Bonnie |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bonnie~ thank you -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is great! Love this! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Insect~ you are most kind to reply. Thank you. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~There isn't a BIT of dork in this!!! I mean that. I enjoyed this piece....and it's so true. Your words are wise ones...so thank you for sharing them. Take care. *Peace. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Words from the heart are NEVER dorky |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Dorky? Where on earth would you come to a conclusion like that? Far from Dorky! A meaningful message for I too would be one feeling the waves wash my life away. We all need a good reminder to kick us in the butt and get us started again in the right direction of life and thinking. This does just that! Beautiful Sea!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I must agree with the others. This is not the least bit dorky. It is a great inspiration and a reminder to us all how very precious every minute of each day is. thanks for sharing this. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
NOT dorky BEAUTIFUL, SWEET AND SINCERE... SO--SEA--  loved it later-sand castle-gator jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Dorky, definitely not!!! beautiful, expressive, yes indeed... regards, sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
SpitFire~ thank you very much Paula Finn~Thanks! WhtDove~ probably because I'm usually a dork  haha You know my mind is always at the ocean......... Mark~ you're welcome and thanks Janet~ thank you, you are always so nice Sudhir lyer~ why thank you kind sir! - SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 what kids can teach us! |
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