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Spring Begins Within
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Spring Begins Within |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments 
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Daisies sleep 'neath lemon rays Heads turned towards the sky... Bathed within the wind's caress Fledgling dreams do fly... Lullabies of crystal blue Harmonize with quiet streams... Luscious blooms of sweetened rose Waft on purpled beams... An angel clad in silvered-white Carries me on gentle wing... Enswathed within his tender soul My spirit softly sings... September rains we dance within And lay 'neath winter's cloud... Caught within each other's arms No darkness is allowed... Spring begins at time's consent But never did it leave our eyes... For a perfect love between two souls Never really dies... *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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Dusk Treader
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Senior Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 1187St. Paul, MN |
Beautiful poem Krista! "For a perfect love between two souls Never really dies..." Ahh, need I say more?  Abrahm Simons "Keep on dreamin' boy 'cause when you stop dreaming it's time to die" - Blind Melon |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Spring begins at time's consent But never did it leave our eyes... For a perfect love between two souls Never really dies... Beautiful indeedy Krista! Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Krista~ If you didn't pen anything else - 'Daisies sleep 'neath lemon rays' this would have been enough. How lovely ... how lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a very beautiful poem from you Krista, lovely words... regards, sudhir |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Such descriptive verses just seemed to trap me right thru this poem I had to read it once again. ~ For a perfect love between 2 souls never dies ~ this was such a sweet ending to a lovely poem. Coco |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Alwye, This one caught my eye and made me fly. |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow Krissa.. that was a beautiful poem... It caught me, and held my attention there... wonderful job. "The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper." Eden Phillpotts *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow!!! Now this is a great poem! I love that last verse..gosh!  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
there you go wafting again...  and making it look so dang easy too... LOVE THOSE LEMON RAYS!!! (silly me ... I just call it sunshine)  also call it LIME GREEN ENVY!!! (kidding just kiding) boy am I glad me muse aint here to see this one... she couldnt take it LOL perfect K AGAIN...dang it LOL later-wafting-gator jm you can say baby baby can I hold you tonite maybe if I said the right words at the right time you'd be mine baby can I hold you tonite Tracy C |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Abrahm- No sweetheart, you needn't say more. Thank you so much for your kind words. Love you much. Maree- Thank you so much hon! Marge- Thanks for your reply, I really appreciate it. Sudhir- Why thank you. Coco- I'm glad you enjoyed. Seymour- I'm glad it caught your eye, for very hard I tried. Cassers- I'm happy you liked it sweetie girl. Poet deVine- Thank you! I'm glad you liked the last verse, I'm proud of it.  JM- Well you can thank a certian Dusk Treader for making my words waft...tis amazing what love can do for ya. Thanks for your reply, it's always an honor to have you read my stuff. *Krista Knutson* "We are not seperate from spirit, we are in it." ~Plotinus~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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