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She Looked at You [Dedicated to Marge Tindal - we have something in common] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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She Looked At You She stood quite quiet, she emoted cool Just one look at her, yes, nobody's fool; Her temper soothing, her demeanor so calm She was restful to see, no uttered qualm… But when she looked at you… First, you're taken in by her eyes of green Fine lined wrinkles of smiles often seen And straight-away she gazes at you so steadily Right back into your eyes, as your soul she sees… Next, her body is perfect, for a woman her age, You can see she's been hugged, perhaps walked a stage; No airs nor swagger, nor feminine wiles She's solid, not stolid, she'll go many more miles. But when she looked at you… There was something about her, it was in the air Not a forbidden scent no, something beyond compare, Yes, something about her, yes, you may think… Ah, it was when she caught your soul, with her quiet wink. She stood there poised, but just on the brink She watched your face, and knows what you think; Quiet contemplation, with face quiet serene But the wink brought forth to mind, a laughing queen. So when she looked at you… She made you quite pleased to be in the same room you caught yourself without your ever present gloom, She lit up your life, more than you liked to think From all that she gave you, one quick little wink. 22 November, 1999 ©KRJ Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Wonderful poem dedicated to a special person!! Love ya, Marge!!!  Great writing!!! Lone Wolf Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I like it, Sunshine! Why haven't I seen this before, though? Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, I think this is the best thing of yours I've seen. It is excellent!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Lone Wolf, thanks, she's a great gal... Elizabeth, it was posted some time go... Marge liked it, so I've dedicated it to her... so glad you had the opportunity to see it this time... 'Deer...high compliments, indeed! Thank you... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea, my friend~ I could not help but remember this one. It reminded me of both my mother and my great grandmother .... and then ... November of last year, I shared it with my daughter ... she said it reminded her of ME ! I was so touched .... she printed it out and framed it and gave it to each of her brothers. They are all convinced that you and I MUST know each other ! Thank you for posting it again. Love you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice poem, i enjoyed reading it very much and understand perfectly how body language can dictate more than speech some of the time . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Yes sunshine this is certainly how I would picture our Marge a lovely poem, glad you shared this as I have not seen it before and I'm glad you re-posted...thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A lovely poem, a wonderful devotional tribute...to a great person... Karilea, glad that you reposted this one... Sudhir. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marge, it was because of your e-mail that I thought perhaps, just perhaps, this should be a submission for Voices... Tom, glad you saw it in your mind... Yes, Tracie, we can all see her, can we not? Thanks... Sudhir, thank you... Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bump - I mean can I help it if this is just a GREAT poem ? ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
{~,^} thanks, m'dear! Hugs right back at you! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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