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Open Poetry #8

The Image of Your Lips

DestinysCharm
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since 2000-04-28

Posts 90

0 posted 2000-06-22 07:16 AM

The Image of Your Lips

They caught me
floating away
on a star
far removed
from day,
in the grasp
of a momentary eclipse
my mind saw
the image of your lips.

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-06-22 07:22 AM

Lovely daydreaming image Destiny's Charm! Well done.

Best wishes,
/Kit

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2000-06-22 11:24 AM

This is great, I love the line "In the grasp of a momentary eclipse", you have a wonderful style, good work and thankyou
Olias

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-06-22 08:53 PM

This is lovely! Soft daydreamy quality to it!

Denise

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