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A cross stick
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A cross stick |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England 
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A sleepy fur-clad caveman Crawls slowly from his bed, rising wearily, opening deep set eyes. standing, stooping, sighing, taking his club (in other words, his cross stick) in hand carefully stalks his pray killing for his dinner. Dunno if I like this or not, but I had another silly idea and went for it  Eric.< !signature--> "We are the music makers and we are the makers of dreams." - Willy Wonka. [This message has been edited by Eric Williams (edited 06-22-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well I like it Eric! It's a neat idea, not easily accomplished, and you made it look so easy ... well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
geez Eric! I could NEVER do this in a million years!  awesome job ~H |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Even with dinner being freshly clubbed, I thought this was cute and very clever! I enjoyed... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very clever, Eric! Denise |
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