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A Melting Moment
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A Melting Moment |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia 
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A Melting Moment When you touch my hand so gently And your lips tenderly come to mine I feel my heart begin to warm And slowly it melts in time When your eyes drifted to mine And you held my body close to yours Once more my heart warmed And my soul began to soar This was a melting moment That I will never forget A moment in my life That I will never regret The warmth my heart felt Will last through many years Throughout my lifes emotions The laughter and the tears So give me that melting moment Melt my heart some more Warm my heart tonight Watch my soul soar < !signature--> Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 06-23-2000).] |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice poem really beautiful , I enjoyed reading it alot  |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Tracie, Great poem, too bad that everybody couldn't have that special feeling. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Tracie, this is beautifully expressed, and I love the title you've chosen...just perfect. ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"melts in your mouth and in your hand"  LOVE this one Tracie... me thinks ya got it bad... and its OH SO GOOD!!! beautiful romantic and sensual poem girl!! yummmy later-spicy-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tracie~ This is a perfect 'melt' ... So sensually and seductively done ... I like sooooooooo much. IT'S BOOKABLE ! ! ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hello fellow 66er! Ohh...tender yet spicy! I like a lot! Great job! Marie~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Whiskey~ Glad you liked the read..Thanks Tracie~ LP~ Thanks for reading..we all get the chance at some stage in our lives, even if it be only once. Tracie~ Claire~ Thanks for your lovely comments Tracie~ Hey Janny Thanks gal...Oh I do, I do  Luv Ya Tracie~ Marge~ Thanks hon for your wonderful comments...I'm too scared to book anything..don't feel my poetry is good enough..Thanks anyway Luv ya Tracie~ Hello sweet 66er Thanks Marie for your wonderful words Tracie~ Hey I think we're almost twins both 66er's and both ie's Catch ya Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NOT GOOD ENOUGH ???? Get in here and edit this for SUBMIT ... NOW ! If I say it's good enough ... IT'S GOOD ENOUGH ! Just do it ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Yep, I agree with marge, this is a great poem and certainly bookable, Do a she says or she'll murder you, no one can control her when she gets like this !!! Enjoyed it loads . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW...alright already!! MUM Marge you are one pushy gal but I still love ya Tracie~ Tom~ doing it now...I'm truly scared  thanks for reading Tom and encouraging me in your own special way Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ahhhhhh ! That's more like it ! Yeah, Mum's are like that .... Love ya' gal ! *Thanks for the supportive 'push', Tom. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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RHONDA BROYLES New Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 9 |
Hello, youre poem touched my heart its amazing when someone can feel that way about another person. That how i feel and that is why i submittd a poem too. |
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RHONDA BROYLES New Member
since 2000-06-23
Posts 9 |
Hello, youre poem touched my heart its amazing when someone can feel that way about another person. That how I feel and that is why I submittd a poem too. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ Gotta luv ya just gotta Tracie~ Rhonda~ I noticed your name a moment ago and I'm about to check your poem out...thanks for reading mine and giving me a wonderful reply. Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Tracie, this is just perfect!! I love the title too. . . we have a group of ice cream stores in the city where I live called "Melting Moments". . .couldn't help but think of them when I read this. . . Just wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Thanks for reading and replying Mmmm ice-cream you say  well the title reminds me of cookies my nan used to make called melting moments and they were delish Thanks again Sven Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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dreamy_eyes Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 67 |
"AMAZING" poem Tracy! You'll be getting me vote! Love Deb -x- |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi Deb and welcome to passions thanks for the vote...no really thanks for reading and replying to this.Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very much a sensual poem, even the title. Exciting read, well done! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Ethome~ Glad you liked the read Thanks for you wonderful reply Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
WOW .. I luv this one Coco |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh thanks for the WOW coco glad you liked Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Beautifully expressed poem, this one Tracie... I am glad that I read this one... regards, sudhir. Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
How did I miss this one Tracie, It melts me (excuse the pun), but I'm voting now. Beautiful poem. Olias |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Very sensual and beautiful. You've got my vote. |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
great sentiment....like the first touch by someone......getting lost in desire...I liked it.....heres my vote!!! Julie :) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sudhir~ I'm so happy you liked this...always glad to see a reply from you Thanks Tracie~ Olias~ Hey I'm pleased to know that this had such an effect, hope you've not been melted too badly Thanks for your reply....Tracie~ Eloise~ Thanks a bunch for reading, replying and voting...appreciate it TracieJulie~ Thanks for your reply and your vote...appreciate you taking the time Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Tracie I'm just a wicked ol' witch from oz  , and I love this poem.Take care, Olias |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hello Olias Thanks for reading and replying By the way I'm from Oz but ain't no witch...well maybe some may say I am Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Beautiful sentiments, Beautiful description of them.. Ahh.. to love and be loved... Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautiful Tracie votingYes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died, and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Tracie,...I am so glad that I caught this one. It's so touching and beautifully written. How I envy thee. *Sigh*. Superb work here. Love it. Take care. *Peace. ~You know what??? I still have never forgotten what you said to me a long time ago when I sort of first got here. I think you have a huge heart and I am still grateful for that E you sent. You are just the sweetest. *Peace. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Prom~ Hi thanks for such a lovely replyTracie~ DA~ Thanks so much, I appreciate it Tracie~ Hello little one don't envy me your own writings are just as good and I enjoy reading them. We are all different and have different ways of presenting our work and what we write about varies as well but we are all great poets as we share our thoughts, dreams, passions and hopes.As for my e your welcome and hey I'd love to here from you Take care Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Beautiful Tacie!!!! This floated and melted and did everything a love poem should do and what's this....your poetry not good enough......OH MY your pen and heart beats with poetry!!!! Thank you for listening to Marge and for sharing this!! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
What could I possibly add that hasn't already been said. This one is destined for the book! God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What a wonderful poem. I relly enjoyed reading it Liz |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dearest Butterflies~ Thanks for you most wonderful comments..unfortunately I'm one of those annoying poeple who never gives themselves enough credit and in my case it's in the genes. My mum is one of the most talented crafts poeple I know able to put her hand to most things and come out with a winner but never gives herself credit for it. Well I thank you again Tracie~ Eagle One~ I appreciate your comments, thanks ever so much Tracie~ Dear Liz I'm so glad that you enjoyed reading this...thanks Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Excellent Tracie! Made you kinda melt just reading these lovely romantic sentiments ... much enjoyed (and loved the title)! Best wishes, /Kit |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
what can i say?except that this poem fully deserves the large number of replies it has gotten and that you write good love poetry like your mum Marge!!! show me some more.... |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Superb!! What beautiful sentiments! So glad you listened to Momma Marge!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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FadingSun Member
since 2000-05-01
Posts 76Southern California |
Tracie, This poem requires a new word for beautiful. I envy the words that pour out your fingertips. You "warmed" my heart deeply with this one S~ In the sight of Love, fear isn't even as great as a single hair: in the law of Love, everything is offered as a sacrifice |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kit~ Thanks for such a wonderful comment and I'm glad you liked the title beacause to tell you truth I was never to sure about it. Tracie~ Kaile~ You have made my head swell with such a reply and as for momma Marge I don't think I could ever match that special lady but thanks for praise I'll still take it Tracie~ Hey Lizzie Thanks hon for the lovely reply, much appreciated. It's hard not to listen to Marge when she gets on your case...bless that Marge she's one in a million Tracie~ Hi sunnyboy glad to see you here thanks for the great comments, glad to have warmed your heart and hey don't be envious of me I've read your work and your fabulous Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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