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Untamed Rage
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Untamed Rage |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! 
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Kind of a strange one I know.....But something we all need to be aware of....I hope it isn't too much!! In an endless sea of madness he knows not what he does Driven by an anger hidden deep within prowling the streets through the darkness up your porchsteps he creeps looking for a victum nothing personal you see just a need to feed the rage that lies deep inside so lock your doors when you sleep close your curtains tight don't leave a key outside no one is safe from him he is a friend, a lover, maybe even someones Dad will you recognize him when you see him? when you look into his eyes? Julie :) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JulieAnn~ I think I understand this, at any rate you wrote it very well!  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
JulieAnn~~ that was a great poem... it really makes a person stop and think, doesn't it? Great Job! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Great format and an excellent topic to ponder. Thank you for your comments as well Mark |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Unfortunately some are filled with an unexplainable rage but they are'nt posting here enough so they can mellow out. That would spill the rage from the inside to the page. Might work you never know. I don't think I would recognize the rage right away by looking in their eyes but I am always cautious. But never too cautious, there's too much life to live out there. Well done!! |
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