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The Dance |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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It's as if I was made to fit in these arms so strong guiding me ~ moving me to this slow seductive song Hot kisses you are trailing from my ear to neck causing explosions leaving me a wreck Fires burning~ where your fingertips caress set my heart leaping in passionate distress Tingling~ now from head to toe this dance so delicious in candle light's soft glow -SEA- Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
OOOOOOhhhhhhhhs and aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhss for this one  Lets dance... (...maybe in the rain...)  regards, sudhir. |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Oh my goodness! I think I may have to go home for lunch! WOW- |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Wow! The passion in this one sure did kindle something within me  very romantic, and quitepassionate i must say! great poem! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sudhir~ thank you for the ooohh's and aaahhh's! Jan~ have a great lunch!  Amy~ thanks! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
SEA - What a wonderful dance you describe. Great poem. Bonnie |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Bonnie~ thanks! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Its very passionate..I loved every verse in it...kisses on the neck..it's so beautiful and I can relate to it very well.. Sincerely A_L |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Girlfriend ... I like it ! Lots and lots. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a fabulous piece, Sea. You also expressed yourself very well too! |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Playing songs of sensual rhythm Swaying bodies blending within Language of movement speak erotic Sensation of falling becoming hypnotic Landing in love's SEA of pleasure Floating around in a dance of forever Eternity of flaming closeness Leading each other past timeless bliss Love your poem |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That dance sounds like it getting quite warm. Very sensual piece of poetic work. Got me going! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is Quite a dance!!! Very nice! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
A_L~ thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Marge~thanks Nate~ thank you for the cool reply Insect~ Wow! Thank you! Ethome~ Excellent, thanks B_D_C~ my favorite kind of dance... glad you liked this! -SEA Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
SEA~ You have such a great talent! Beautiful poem! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dawn E~ thanks very much! -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Great poem. I believe my day will be short and my nite quite long. Thank you for the pleasure I now feel. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I feel dance steps in your rhyme and passion in your heart wonderful poem Thankyou Olias |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I enjoyed reading this romantic poem..seems like the place where I would like to be. James |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, I like dances, stories about dancing, poems about dancing...nice job! Sunshine ~~~Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see the shadow. Helen Keller ~~~ |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Great job sea! I like these knd of dances too, now if I could find someone willing to dance like this it would be a delight!!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark,Olias,James,Sunshine,and A Romantic Heart~ thank you all for your nice replys -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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