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Symphony Of Love |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I hear a song in my heart < !signature-->Know exactly how it starts It begins slow and soft As the notes begin to loft Effortlessly through the air I let the music take me there Your love is so moving and sweet I hear a crescendo when we meet Soon our love will be in bloom The sound of the symphony fills the room I can hear every section The music is instrumental perfection Just one look in your eyes Sends my spirit on the rise My heart beats in time These feelings are so sublime Your heart provides the harmony Filled with compassion it sets me free The cadence of the timpani Awakens something deep in me Your movements seem to flow Smooth as the cello's bow You caress my glistening skin As our symphony begins again Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 06-20-2000).] |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Lone Wolf, You must go back and submit this one to votw It is PERFECT All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Glad to see you submitted this FINALLY LOL All my love, Jeffrey I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is great work. i voted for it glad you entered it. good job and keep it up. I'm the lord, I'm the havoc, I'm the soul |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Mozart, take guard, there is a new symphony here, and lone wolf is the new master of Symphony.... excellent reading, Lone Wolf... regards, sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
LW~ Beautiful symphony...well done  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maestro ! Love it. ~*Marge*~ |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
I could hear the music growing louder with each passing line. It took me a minute to figure out what voting for it meant, but as soon as I figured it out, I did (vote for it) Bravo! [This message has been edited by Jan (edited 06-21-2000).] |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
This is a great piece of writing and it gets my vote, you speak whats in my heart everyday. Thankyou for sharing this Olias |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
OOOOh, I l-o-v-e-d this one! |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Very nice piece!!  Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jeffrey....Okay, I did!!! Thank you for the suggestion. Jeremiah...Thank you for the compliment and your vote. Sudhir...Master? Oh, I like that!! Thank you so much. Loved writing this one. Tracie...Happy you enjoyed. Always have loved the symphony. Marge...Bowing....thank you. Happy to hear that!! Jan...Exactly what I was trying to capture. You just made my day!! Olias...You heart is beautiful myt friend. Thank you. Gemini.... Justbleu...Thanks. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
I liked it a lot.Keep writing and I'll be looking forword to read more of your poems!!!! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh LW,...I hope you are sooo proud of yourself....cuz I am!!! hehe....this is awesome. Love it. Take care you. *Peace. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vandana....Thank you and I will always write. Happy to hear you will read. SF....Always happy to make you proud!! I am too...yes. I think it is one of my best yet. Just have music in my soul. You take care too. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
DO YOU TAKE REQUESTS  perfect LW... sorry to be so late to this party... I'm still playing catch up from this weekend VOTE IN NOW |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
JM, YES, FOR YOU, I DO REQUESTS!! Thank you for the reply and vote. Never have to apologize for being late!!! I know you have a life too!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Is this one on the program?? Great one LW. . . keep it up!!! ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh LoneWolf, what lovely music you play! Just delightful ... such a melodic flow within, loved this! (click) Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Doh! I said click but got so caught up in commenting ... forgot to actually do it!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sven, Yes, it is...page two at the top... Thank you!! I will. Kit, Thank you very much. I try. Just how I feel. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
my vote is in!!! Very romantic Lone! |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Great poem, I loved it . It flowed really well . I voted . L.of.L. Tom . Insanity is a perfectly normal responce to an abnormal world -R.D.Laing.- |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I can hear the music loud and clear. A masterpiece from the Maestro, great work. God grant me the serenity to accept the people I cannot change, the courage to change the one I can, and the wisdom to know it's me. ~Unknown |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
RH . . . Thanks for the reply and vote my friend. We all know YOU'RE the romantic one though!! Angelswing . . . Just like the music, thanks. Eagle One . . . Me too, LOL. Wow, never been called Maestro before!! Thanks!! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. --William Wordsworth |
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