Open Poetry #8 |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
Walk not with arrogance and pride be humble in your existence seek not the free ride do not give into their persistence be awake to the wonders of the soul seek out like minds yearn to be whole walk with confidence be you be what is in your heart seek a true friend out for they are very few seek the understanding of a troubled heart let empathy not abandon you let your dreams be strong and true be not afraid of who you are for it is you that you must please not man or woman, friend or foe in the end it is just you and your soul let your colors shine through bright sympathize with anothers plight be slow to anger and quick to forgive nourish your mind free your soul fly with the eagles be not afraid to grow old learn from the past be not afraid of the future stand up for your beliefs as long as it doesn't hurt your neighbor and at the end of night if you can look yourself in the eye not even asking yourself why no questions left the day is done you and your soul becoming one no regrets you've done your best only than can you really rest... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A handful of people posssesing those traits in the right places could truly change the world. Very nice julie, you describe people with desirable traits so how about hmmmm, "Optative Behaviours" jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
an excellent poem Julie, some great wisdom. Title how about "ideaolgy" seek a true friend out for they are very few seek the understanding of a troubled heart let empathy not abandon you let your dreams be strong and true be not afraid of who you are for it is you that you must please not man or woman, friend or foe in the end it is just you and your soul let your colors shine through bright sympathize with anothers plight be slow to anger and quick to forgive nourish your mind free your soul "monuments put from pen to paper turns me into a gutless wonder" Manic street preachers |
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JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
thank you Jamie for your comments.....nice poem title you have chosen..... and Brian.....yes I like it...it is just perfect!!! I am glad you liked the poem... Julie :) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Quite an impressive piece of poetry...How about "Soul Rest" or "May Your Soul Rest". James |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Julie! Denise |
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