Open Poetry #8 |
Sorrowfull Crys........... |
JulieAnn Senior Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 754Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!! |
My pain succumbs to the darkness till daylight once again shows it's angry face i've loved and lost laughed and cried told both truth and lies still I don't how we've came to this place of emptiness and demise Is it the cool of the wind in my hair that I seek? is it freedom 'round the bend will I be strong or will I be weak? you say you still love me Though the trust is gone you have no respect that left with the days dawn I'm sure it was painful to find me there that day I know you are angry watching carefully what you say lifes full of curves ne'er know what we'll find lifes full of broken hearts when love goes blind selfishness is my only excuse destruction is my fate I turn to you for forgiveness you only look away i can't blame you i'd do the same so I say goodbye now as I board this plane just remember the place you'll find me buried deep inside when your feeling lonely I promise not to hide I'll take away the emptiness put happiness in it's place for you can't deny the happy times that reside deep inside..... [This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 06-12-2000).] |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Julie Why it happens ? God knows for nothing happens without a reason..may be its a test..or something like that..just hang around..and may be you'll find it. Sincerely A_L |
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Antonio New Member
since 2000-06-12
Posts 4Sweden |
Thanks JulieAnn I wish I could feel the way you do...but my heart is broken and it feels like it will never heal... Though your poem gives me hope.... Thank you and love to you from me! -Antonio- |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Julie Ann~ This is Excellent!! So much sadness and pain within your weave, you have entered the doors of Passions and now I hope that you find release and healing within it's rooms. Thank you for sharing this piece~ |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Welcome to Passions Julie. I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here. Look forward to reading more from you. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Welcome to Passions Julie. I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here. Look forward to reading more from you. |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Hello JulieAnn and welcome to Passions... I must say that your poem brought back some painfull memories...But that means thats it´s a good poem. I thank you for touching me with it, and hope to be touched by you again soon by your powerful poems... Sincerely yours -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Hello JulieAnn, I hope you find as much in Passions as I have already, I'm sure you will. A wonderful poem you have written. Dark and quiet, it brought me back to a mistake once made. I look forward to more. Trew. I have been to see the world. Tasted life at every turn. And all the time your face came back to haunt me. -Chris DeBurgh |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Elegantly sad! Welcome to the family. I hope to read more from you (already did..!) Please check your email for a special message. |
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notlikely2 Member
since 2000-06-16
Posts 308UK |
Hi Julie I have just found this after searching your entries when you replied to one of my postings. It brought tears to my eyes and a feeling of de ja vue. Very, very good. Love is like the measles.....the older you are, the harder it hits you! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
just remember the place you'll find me buried deep inside when your feeling lonely I promise not to hide I'll take away the emptiness put happiness in it's place for you can't deny the happy times that reside deep inside..... ----------------- Julie, im SO glad I did not miss this excellent poem, if I have not done so ...add my welcome to the list... this is wonderful, heartfelt writing you express these emotions perfectly those last two stanza cut deep... I look forward to more of your work I have a feeling I will relate to your words. take care jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Powerful emotions straight from the heart JulieAnne ... wonderful poem! Welcome to Passions! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome JulieAnn. . . This is full of powerful emotions. . .but here you will find rest. . . enter. . . and be welcome. . . ---------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
Like those before me, what a powerful poem this was. Great job!!! |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Julie I read it again..it is not always easy to say goodbye and you expressed it very well..good poem.. Sincerely A_L |
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