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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Who am I ? Who are you ? None is real Life is a trial But love is not Its a life-knot Between two minds Between two hearts So if you're real If you have feelings of love Communicate in a proper way So that I can know you're mine And I'm yours forever Love is like a aging wine It develops with age But deceit just causes rage I've nothing to add for now For we're not bound by any holy vow I love you still as a friend and a lover If you're real as me Communicate in a proper way We have loved long enough To be more real and open Sincerely A_L |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Yes, Amazon_lover! You said it so well. Elizabeth I'm grabbing my hat and coat I'm leaving the cat a note Quick call me a ferry boat-getting out of town! |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
truth!  good one AL ~Heather |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~A_L,....right on!!! This poem holds a very important message. It is so true...and I can just feel it pouring right out of you. Well done with this. Take care. *Peace. |
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