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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA 
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She came to me this rainy dreary weekend afternoon... She said to me we have a problem we need to speak real soon... She looked at me then closed her eyes and asked me to help her pack... She turned from me and walked away and never did look back... I sat alone and watched her drive away in my new car... I sat and cried these lonely tears and wished upon this star... I closed my eyes and prayed to God that soon she would return... I woke up tired with swollen eyes When will I ever learn... I hoped and prayed and said some chants and checked the garage again... I never should have left my laptop inside that piece of tin.... Christopher M. Grimm < !signature--> Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. [This message has been edited by CMGrimm (edited 06-17-2000).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
OH ha ha ha OUCH, this is too funny! Er....okay, so maybe it's not funny to YOU! LOL I think I would be more worried about the new car being gone! hehehe Thanks for the chuckle!  |
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anomaly187 Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 284San Francisco,CA,US |
heh that was very beautiful..let me go see if i can find anything else you have written. "My heart is broke,but i have some glue. Help me inhale,and mend it with you. We'll float around,and hang out on clouds, then we'll come down,and have |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
LOL..loved this!!!  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ROFL.....I like this!!!! Good one!!!! Guess you learned your lesson the hard way!! LW Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Great poem. Enjoyed the read.  |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
LOL Chris ------ got me laughing Well done! ~netswan |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what a drag, cant read poetry in passions with the car... this would make a good ironic country song baby took my heart and took my car .. took my puter ... she wont get far... nevermind LOL( sorry too much caffeine tonite) funny and not... when ya got lemons...make lemonaid  good luck to ya jm It's amazing How you make your face just like a wall How you take your heart and turn it off How I turn my head and you lose it all ... And it's unnerving (How one move just puts me by myself) There you go just trusting someone else (Now I know I put us both through hell) ... I'm not sayin That there was nothing wrong (I just didn't think you'd ever get tired of me) And I'm not sayin (We ever had the right to hold on) (I just didn't wanna let you get away from me) ~MB20~ She says baby, It's 3AM ... I must be lonely, When she says baby, Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes, Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it. ~MB20~ |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
LOL...thanks for the comments everyone... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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Jan Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 114 |
Ouch! At least you kept your sense of humor! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem!!!!!!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
chris, this was serious yet funny. sorry couldn't help laughing at the end. love your work! take care. amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks AMy, Jan, and vandana... chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
ROTFLMAO TOO FUNNY!!!! Well not really... but still! Don't feel so bad Chris, I lost a house a car, a PC AND to top it all off still have to pay the &%^$^#% money every month!!!! No matter how bad it seems someone always has it worse! Thanks for the laugh bud...SS |
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CMGrimm Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 685USA |
Thanks for enjoying sea...lol chris Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Chris,....haha...getting in line here to say this was great. Made me laugh....although I am sorry things didn't work out,..but shoot, haha...this is too much. Love it. *Peace. |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
CMgrimm, This is too funny, ROFLMAO! Your wit Sparkles here! WAY TO GO! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
A perfect blend of both sadness and humour. Just the way to treat such situations. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
yeah yeah yeah what a cruel woman! take my car take my dog take my money LEAVE THE LAPTOP!!!!!!! I love it! ~Heather |
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