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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
She She is so beautiful to me. She is as tender as the early morning dew I see energizing the leaves of the majestic banyan tree. She is the rain drops gently landing on multi-colored tropical flowers as I am awakened by the soft tapping of early morning rain showers. She is the wind lavishly blowing thru the fronds of the coconut trees and the lovely sounds flowing thru the air as the wind animates so many silky palm leaves. She is the North Shore waves rhythmically washing upon the sandy shore totally immersing and bathing me in the beauty of the woman I simply adore. She is as warm as the precious sunlight flowing down to caress us from heaven above. She is an exotic wonder of nature to enjoy and grow to love. She is soft to my touch. I desire her beauty so much. Jameslee@June18,2000 AnotherFather'sDay thinkingaboutLena |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
James, I like this poem very much. You are a wonderful writer. Keep up the good work! Laura |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ this is beautiful and SHE is so lucky...does SHE even know?  -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Wow James,..this is such beautiful writing. So aromatic,...and yummy...love it. This is just great. Take care. *Peace. |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful poem, wonderful images. She is the North Shore waves rhythmically washing upon the sandy shore totally immersing and bathing me in the beauty of the woman I simply adore. She is as warm as the precious sunlight flowing down to caress us from heaven above. She is an exotic wonder of nature to enjoy and grow to love. ------------------------ "WE IRISH ARE TOO POETIC TO BE POETS, WE ARE A NATION OF BRILLIANT FAILURES." Oscar Wilde. "A rock pile ceases to be |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Your pen has once again amazed me. Beautifully written James. Marina |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hi, James~ Your heart is showing and it's beautiful ! Enjoyed the soft tender read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
James~ as always your work is breathtaking. SHE is a lucky woman indeed. This was so lovely with some very vivid images. Thanks so much for sharing! Take care, Amy "Don't be dismayed at goodbyes. A farewell is before you can meet again. And meeting again after a moment or a lifetime is certain for those who are friends." "Fate exists but it can only take you so far, Because once you're there It's up to you to make it happen." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Paris, Sea, Spitfire, brian, Marina, Marge, and Amy for your beautiful responses. James |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I talked to Lena tonight and I didn't buy her any flowers but I bought her three scented candles and she liked that and I gave her two poems written for her..."She" and "Perhaps". I told her I wanted to be her friend and go slow with her and she said she appreciated how slow I was moving...and she said she enjoys the poetry I write for her. I told her I was going to wait for her and I ask her how long would I be waiting...I mentioned 5 years..and she laughed and said no it would be this year. I told her I was not going to ask her to a movie even though the desire was already in my heart and I would wait until the desire for her to go to the movies with me was in her heart and then she could ask me to the movies...I think I am really learning how to go slow...we had lots of fun talking and laughing and touching...I let her do most of the touching. James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Yes James! Way to go! I just read your follow-up note ... sounds like things are moving along beautifully with your heart's desire ... so happy for you! Of course, she'd just HAVE to melt after reading these 2 sweet and tender poems. Beautifully penned James ... SHE is gonna be one lucky lady. Best wishes, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Kit thank you for your beautiful response...you know what...I am going to try to start thinking that way..that she will be one lucky lady....James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful expressions of endearment cascading down through the lines like a waterfall of love. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
James~ My friend, this is absolutely lovely! Such beautiful Imagery - it fills my head and my heart with lovely thoughts! love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you ethome and Terry your words have touched my heart. James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I read the follow up note too, I think it sounds wonderful, if you keep going like this you will make her want you, (the poems would have done it for me  ) And yes, you should start thinking that she will be lucky to have YOU not just you lucky to have her. Best of luck to you sweetie -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sea a key word is "if" I keep trying. I know some of us think we can win someones heart and I would like to believe that..I kindof think if you give a woman special attention perhaps you can soften her heart. The problem for me is many times before I have kept trying to win a womans heart, and I have after a long period of time..but then in the long run the relationship didn't work out because I wasn't really the one they wanted. So I prefer a relationship where the woman chases me just as much as I chase her. So far Lena has not done that...in word she has but not in action. So how long should I continue to try....James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I don't know.... I've never had a problem letting a man know I was interested.....sometimes I shouldn't have let them know and let them chase me some, but I hate games and have always felt that if you like someone it shouldn't be a big secret or game..... So I dunno..... I guess it depends on how she responds, but if she isn't well there are plenty of women out there..... good luck. -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thanks Sea...people have told me if I like a woman don't let her know right away...somehow I can never do that...I can't wait to tell her. The woman that I am crazy about...Lena, won't call me and she makes me do all the work...another woman named Mena I just met a few weeks ago has already called me 3 times. I love Lena but I hate her not calling. I'm not sure how I feel about Mena yet because it's too soon but I love her calling me. James |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
James: A beautiful poem, with breathtaking imagery. You are just a natural when it comes to writing about love. Your love life sounds a bit like mine, confusing at times and complicated, hang in there, just be your sweet romantic self and yes, keep writing those poems for her, it will melt her heart and eventually she will be all yours to love. For now, just try to have patience (believe me, I know that it's hard) and that will impress her and she will be more readily to start a relationship because you respected her in the first place. Respect and friendship is key Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives me wings to fly |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Melissa for your beautiful response. I am attempting to be her friend and we shall see what happens. We had lunch together the other afternoon and we are making progress in our communication and in the relationship as a whole. James |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
James this is a beautifully penned poem..well done I hope everything works out for you and it time it just might Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Tracie for your lovely response full of hope...I am waiting right now...you know the story of the turtle and the hare...I feel like I have run too far ahead of Lena and I am waiting for her to catch up...I have offered my friendship or my love and it is up to her to decide which she desires, if any, and to decide if she believes me or if she doesn't care about me...if she doesn't believe me but wants to believe me we have reached the same place...James |
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