Open Poetry #8 |
Letting go |
Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
In a language all but lost It comes to my mind Visions I had thought gone Lost inside me, some splended sign. I have chosen this path For which I leave all Everything I know of Everyone I have loved. My pain disapears As the miles scream away My youth comes to me But more mature on this day. I am not concise at being, Being what I am I have heard the tails before Of lost souls and bitter friends. Yet I go, and still on Traveling the night The stars my companions City lights few and far. To you my love I must seem the fool, To travel this road Attempting to find my heart. To ask you to let me go To ask you for freedom To call to you, my pain My sorrow that I have gained. To let go what binds And find our seperate lives To know I still care Though from miles away In Northern air. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The stars my companions City lights few and far. To you my love I must seem the fool, To travel this road Attempting to find my heart. To ask you to let me go To ask you for freedom To call to you, my pain My sorrow that I have gained. To let go what binds And find our seperate lives To know I still care Though from miles away In Northern air. ----------------- its never foolish for one to try to find themselves and their heart, letting go is always the hardest thing a heart has to do ... one of loves hardeds learned lessons... I'm still learning ...the hard way. well written thoughts Michael, I liked the reference of looking North. I hope you find all that your searching for. take care jm I think I could need - this in my life If you're gone - baby you need to come home there's a little bit of something me In everything in you MB20 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Exceptional work, I love the ending, very well written. That's the hard part the breaking up. Very very good. |
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