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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
The memory of love remains here inside my heart. The love of her will always remain. But now it is time to let only the dreams mourn her loss. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
This is filled with so much emotion and says so much in only a few words...wonderfully done, thank you for sharing this~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lonelypoet~ So much said with few words, I like that, great job!  -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
great if you can separate the dreams from the heart. Good poem! |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Powerful. "But now it is time to let only the dreams mourn her loss." You have my vote!!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Thank you all for taking the time to comment. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Much said with few words. Corinne |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
*sigh* this I know... ~Heather |
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