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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii 
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Dangerous does the arm unfold, a story's life has been told, and weatheres from far have gathered time, like a knife strumming in hand. Weathers masked with waters never getting to hide. Let go, let low, your stinging eye. [This message has been edited by redheart angrybraids (edited 06-18-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
How did this get buried? Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
How, indeed, Temptress...thank you for bringing this back up... redheart, gotta love the knife thing...very visual imagery there...sorry for the belated reply...(i am quite often late...) |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you all so much for picking this one out of the ditch, and checking it out. i made my moment. kindly, redheart angrybraids |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
great poem, my slow brain is attempting to read between the lines, you have to understand it is sunday. Well i am picking you some very intense emotions from this piece, some very sharp (excuse the pun) images. and weatheres from far have gathered time, like a knife strumming in hand. loved that verse. really enjoyed the poem. ------------------------ "Take nothing but pictures. Leave nothing but footprints. Kill nothing but time". Baltimore Grotto "To be nobody-but-yourself-in a world which is doing its best night and day, to make you everybody else - means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting." E.E Cummings. "Art is a lie which makes us realise the truth." Pablo Picasso "We Irish are too poetical to be poets, we are a nation of brilliant failures" Oscar Wilde ----- |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
thank you brain, love the pun Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
redheart, this is wonderful, love the way you write... and weatheres from far have gathered time, like a knife strumming in hand love this!  |
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